The writing is surprisingly good, especially how it flows and connects. World building and characters are, as of now a 5. Keep it up. I suggest editing a few sentences to better match the wording typically used in 1PV. ??
Don't forget to read this story It's quite interesting ?
Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?
so far it's going well, the pacing is good too.
A thought-provoking journey through life’s choices, regrets, and second chances. Uplifting and introspective. I’m interested to see what happens next.
Review for FP. Need more chapters please.
pretty good, apart from the pacing, the story is not bad
Great so far. But the author should look for a different interpretation of the cover because to me it just makes me think of Solo Leveling after reading the description. Look I get there was inspiration but dang those sure do look like shadowbeasts
I really love this story! Abell is relatable to me in many ways and I want to see him grow. The world is very inviting and I want to know more after every chapter and thanks for uploading so consistently! Looking forward to more ?.
Honestly love it. ??????Enjoyable both inside and out of the smuttiness.❤️u200d??Looking forward to where it goes. ??
I am reading this because the other work of the autor. I'm feeling a bit disapointed because the character of the FL. I'm waiting of the development of her and to be smarter
author overall, I noticed some mistakes in your novel, but even then it's really good. I've noticed some spelling mistakes here and there, although the main problem I've had with this book is that it goes over the top when it comes to explaining what happens inside the classes, even though it could easily be explained in a couple of sentences at most. when it comes to that it feels like the author is trying to find something to talk about but doesn't have the imagination to do so. even then, pretty good novel, I would suggest reading for at least the first Arc (16 chapters)