I'm really excited about how Jeff life would turn out! can't wait for more
honestly I love this author! Her books take on a different take on your usual story she keeps you on your toes the entire time you are reading! The twists and turns in this books were unreal! I loved trying to figure out what was going on with all the characters!
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The writing quality is good! I also like how the world background is slowly showing. This is definitely a nice work! ^^)/ perhaps we get to see more about this hero thing in later chapters
reviewing my own book is kinda funny, but be advised please read part 1, as it will be a lil crucial to this story.
Good work author?I believe you're gonna make it here.Welcome to the world of writing.?Try this book out people, I'll try my best to support you.
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
This was the first novel I read, it’s okay but it doesn’t have a lot of chapters atm, so I hope this novel turns out to be good.
A superlative adrenaline running narrative, keeping me at the edge all through the novel. It is filled with all thrills besides perfect blend of suspense arousing the interest of the reader.Eagerly waiting for the remaining part of the novel.
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Please feel free to leave feedback on what you like and dislike about the story and my writing and I'll try my best to take it into account when making chapters in the future
After clocking over three hundred chapters, I will be giving my novel a Review.Firstly, I would like to say that while I am the author, my opinions on this book isn’t just based on bias.It’s a wonderful and interesting story.I have received a few criticisms, of which I will be addressing here.As readers, you should also be prepared to see these factors. So that you’re not caught off guard, let me explain a few things.[Sp0iler Alert]*Some things mentioned may contain mild sp0ilers*Firstly;The MC acts like a kid even though he’s supposed to be an old sage internally.Secondly;The Academy Arc makes no sense because of how Mc is treated despite being of nobilityThirdly;Cliche routes like Demons and Academy being implemented Fourthly;The reasons behind some of Mc’s seemingly risky/immature actionsLastly;The story’s progression To answer those major criticisms, I have made this Review.Answer 1: If you’ve ever watched Black Clover, or some similar Anime, you tend to notice some old personalities who act immature at times. An example is Julius Novachrono. Thanks to his love of Magic, and his goofy personality, he acts like a child sometimes. However, no one can deny how epic he is when he needs to be.That’s exactly the same as the MC. If you’re patient enough and just accept this aspect of him, you’ll love his character moreHe’s meant to be more relatable and expressive. Don’t expect an ‘Ayanokoji’ for the MCHe behaves childish sometimes, but he really isn’t. Those who have gone further in the story (especially the third arc) can testify to this.Answer 2: Ainzlark Academy is purely meritocratic Even the Prince of the Kingdom attends, and the only reason he’s regarded well is because of his talent for Magic.The MC’s path to success isn’t known by anyone, so they would naturally ostracize him by their standardsBut, it isn’t permanent, so please… don’t get too annoyed.Answer 3:This novel may seem cliche from the start, but it’s nothing like that at all. Some argue that the Academy was unnecessary, but that’s a lie.If you read the story well, you’ll understand why I went down that route.As for Demons, it’s not as simple as many works have depicted their existence. Again, you need to read the story to find out.Answer 4: The MC is very smart.If you’ve reached the third arc, you’ll understand this perfectly well.Even from the first arc, you begin to see traces of his intelligence.Not just Magic, but strategy and knowledge in other fields. But, some of his actions may seem a little off. Please do not impulsively judge Many people dropped the book at first arc because they were too stuck up with their belief of the MCUnknown to many, in the third arc, the MC explains the rationale behind his seemingly rash action.Everything the MC does has a reason. I don’t mean he’s perfect and he’s always right. But… he’s not stupid.Answer 5:At some point, I changed the POV. Criticisms appeared because I didn’t focus on the MC for some chapters.But, please understand that he’s not the only important person in the story. Other important characters will be introduced.I certainly hope you enjoy this story.Cheers