The Shadowx

Ahh... I like that you started with a family and the protagonist being extraordinary, better than the stereotype loses.The writing was fair and easy to hook into...while the character tone looked a bit unnatural. might work on that.There's not may error I can found throughout the first six chapters, the author has worked his muscle on that.Overall it has potential, like most other vrrpg novels, though its seemed a bit different than those.Good luck Author for the sprity...

Really fucking awesome. Can’t wait to see more development and more chapters! I’m really into the plot and think this book has a lot of potential.

The concept is novel with the MC being a monk for a game character. Fast paced, but the writing style is weird. The first chapter was basically information dump with no transition. However, the world building and stats show the effort of the Author. But give it a try, and see if it is right for you.

The story is not too bad, it is basically a first work of attempt by an author, with many *** scenes and many cliches.My biggest problem is that the MC ended up raping a character, he hears aphrodisiac drugs involved, even though it wasn't the MC himself that made the woman look like this, I couldn't keep reading.I have seen cases where women at parties were drugged or were heavily drunk and were raped.Esim, this is rape, you have *** with someone who is not aware or under strong drug effects, it is rape, and even though the author tried to justify things, the character of the MC at that point for me, was worth less than rubbish.

Just by reading the book and the first chapters, I knew I'll get addicted! never blink once, there are unexpected things that can happen in an instant. good job author, such an exciting read!

It's my book, soooo... I meannn... obviously 5 stars.But being honest, I believe that it's actually worth such a rating.If you like sports, then hop on for the ride, I guarantee you won't be disappointed, and well, there's a bit of romance as well if you want to see it.Also, this book doesn't have anything supernatural apart from the time regression/displacement at the beginning of the story, so if you fancy something like that, you could hop on the ride too.All in all, I think, it's a book you'll enjoy reading, so read, add it to your library, vote powerstones, leave a review and we'll all be happy.... If not, I will find you, and force it down your... (Complete that sentence as you will)