The dialogue in this chapter is absolutely delicious. Let me just highlight a few moments that made me laugh out loud. Zhang Xiu's line 'Wenhe! I threw him back!' delivered with the enthusiasm of someone who just accomplished something magnificent. The man is twice as happy throwing Dian Wei back as he was retrieving him. This is a warlord whose emotional range peaks at 'I dumped the dog back.' I love him. Dian Wei's internal monologue when Xiahou Yuan suggests he sneak onto the battlefield: 'What do you take me for?! Capturing enemy soldiers on the battlefield? Do you think I'm a hunting dog?!' And the narrator immediately follows with 'Dian Wei: Not a dog [cat paw]' because of COURSE the author couldn't resist that joke. The self-aware humor here is perfectly calibrated. Huang Yueying's declaration to Jia Xu is probably my favorite dialogue moment: 'If you're going to join Cao Cao, I'll follow you. If you go to Yuan Shao, I'll follow you too. Just teach me the principle behind this explosion.' This woman is not interested in politics or loyalty or any of that nonsense. She wants knowledge. She has a cup of water and a clay pot in her hands and she is LOOKING AT JIA XU WITH INTENSE CURIOSITY. Her voice is sharp, direct, and completely uninterested in social niceties. Guo Jia's lazy, dismissive tone is perfectly captured: 'He was a lazy man, too lazy to bother explaining such trivial matters that could be easily understood.' Even his narration feels like he's speaking while half-asleep. And then his internal reaction to Zhuge Liang — 'Even when he commanded Cao's army himself, he never had it as smooth as that kid on the other side' — this is Guo Jia admitting defeat without ever saying the words out loud. The narrative voice itself is a character. It's witty, occasionally breaks the fourth wall with those internet-style asides, and never takes itself too seriously. But when it needs to, it can be genuinely moving. The balance is impressive.
all i will say after reading those 3 chapter its goated and i am patiently waiting for other chapter as well.hopefully you will not drop this novel as its good
Overall, I like it. I like how cute it is, but as for the book cover, I know there's still more you can offer there so keep it up! I will truly recommend this, this is worth youuurr very precious time. Keep writing, my dear author!!!!!!!!
It has a good story plot progression rate with a very good update stability rate so far.The MC is really op which makes it a plus in my book. i can't say for the future but for now it's worth a read
Hello, brokenback here as the author of Blood and Burden. As you've know that my writing will eventually change from time to time until I've found my perfect one that I could use comfortably. So it would be awesome if all you who reading this series could give me many feedbacks to improve my writing, and possibly increases frequent update for the series.That is it all! Thank you so much for reading this first series of mine.
Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ?? Let me give you all five stars for all five categories for your new book as my supp ort????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???
I think Alice is already in love ? can't wait to see who falls first ?
please add a review guys, thank you so much
It's a good novel, don't know about you but personally,i like it.
Hi all ?! I’m Draserraney, the author of this exciting story about surviving magical creatures. If you’re thinking this might be something like Fantastic Beasts… well, it’s not. Not really, I promise!I hope you’ll enjoy reading this story as much as I’ve loved writing it. I poured my imagination on it as wild as I can *LOL*If you like what you read, don’t forget to leave a review, drop a comment, or add it to your collection. It would give me the encouragement to do better and improve what I'm lacking. If you have a magical creature you’d like Carl to encounter in the story, let me know in the comments—I’m always open to suggestions!P.S. I read every single comment, and I truly appreciate all the support and feedback. ??
I was completely hooked! The tension between Carmilla’s thirst for revenge and her forbidden love for Lucian is intense. The plot twists and dark romance make this story unforgettable.
Great book very good writing loving it so far slow pace on chapters but I ain’t complaining