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It was a good book until the abrupt incomplete ending though.
126 chapters 3-14-23
Everleigh miles we need a 4th book to finish the series, the monster veil, the prophecy, the little akyrans and icareis mini me, great story thanks for a peek into your world of imagination, blessed.
Good news. My first part of my story if finished. So if you would like to read the complete story it ends at 322. The second part of the book will be for my readers that want to continue on and read more. Unfortunately both books go together so I did not feel comfortable creating a new book.
Superb story. I enjoyed every bit of it. Will read all your other books
sorry, after the second alpha it just gets in my nerves
"It was enjoyable reading the first chapter where ML was still a ghost, gradually revealing his 'new side' as a husband. However, I found the pregnancy plot confusing since the story portrays him as an ordinary human, despite the supernatural tag. Unless he's a demon reincarnation, it doesn't make sense. The misunderstandings between them didn't appeal to me; they felt uninteresting and frustrating, especially due to the MC. My heart goes out to Ah Chi ??."
In simpler terms: I enjoyed the early chapters with the ghost ML and his evolving relationship. But the pregnancy part was puzzling since he's portrayed as human. Unless there's a supernatural twist, it doesn't fit. The misunderstandings between them were boring and frustrating, especially because of the main character. Poor Ah Chi, I feel for her.
I persevered for almost 50 chapters and I can tell you one truth: This novel is for people with strong hearts. There is r*pe/mindbreak/manipulation (psychologically accurate)/pedoph*lia/inc*st... The entire book is very dark and unsettling resembling a creature from Cthulhu. If you can't handle any of it, then don't even bother with this. However, if that's your kink... huehue... GO TO A PSYCHOLOGIST YOU FUCIN PSYCHO!
Two new chapters we going again lads
It gets boring sometimes but become interesting later then boring again after some chapters then again interesting ( it also feels repetitive)
Thanks for the review.. i decided not to read it. Actually i like strong FL but the ml should treat her well