Love this story, characters and development. This story is funny,sad, delicious, halirious and delightful to read. Love your writing
A História é muito boa, prende do começo ao fim. Tem, claro , algumas partes mais lentas, mas são poucas e não são inúteis. O final foi meio apressado, podia ter durado uns 10-15 capítulos a mais. No geral é muito bom!!
This book is crazy good.The author has a good and broad knowledge . This is ab interesting pieces of art.
As soon as i saw first chapter i said hold up this is good.Every chapter is better then previous one!Keep it up!
It’s a good synopsis to romance reader and interesting story. And the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. I highly recommend it.
very nice plot good writing and a decent storyline, well done!
look's nice so early 5 star for this story ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Wow, can't wait to see what happens in the end, I love your way of narrating the story, so easy to understand. And your updating is okay for me ???
As someone who has loved Gene System from this author, I recall when this story was part of a contest yet did not get placed. It is a different kinda story than anything on this platform. It is fun while utilizing important themes such as apocalyptic themes, loss, panic going through the fact you could lose everything and do. Bodily transformation and so many other scary themes I did not expect to see even though those are usual in Isekai, just nice to see something new!
I need to point out that the scene from chapter 120-122 is plagiarized from a korean novel 'The main heroines are trying to k*ll me'. it disappointed me that the author is so shameless as to steal a scene from that novel without even doing a good job editing it, like there's no effort except changing the names and interaction a little.
I thought I'd found a hidden gem, up until it's revealed that the entire female ruling class (and potential harem members) are psychopaths who run an underground grooming gang, where they 'rescue' homeless women and **** them whenever they want. Magical contracts ensure 'loyalty', and consent doesn't seem to come into it either.Writing quality is good, update stability is very good, story up until this point was good too, but nah, this is a deal breaker for me.
I'm on chapter 387, Seriously Jian Shu didn't die what a disappointment, this arc in my opinion was not good we never saw our mc fight properly and when he fought at the end he was repressed and if it wasn't for help he would have died, besides why he is still not a great master, Another point is that he just keeps flirting and doesn't advance or grow, the previous plot where there was ntr bothered me but I said let's give him another chance and boom chapters later Jun left that world and only hinted that when he comes back he will only take the useless girl he left pregnant with him, so my question is why did he love the mother and daughter and the girl from the dojo if he was just going to put them aside as waste, I hope the author changes that and when he goes to that world he takes them all, and now with the new system functions I think that will be possible, I hope the next plot will be more interesting because the first 150 chapters were pretty good, that's my opinion and a greeting.