hehe. this is nice . i am looking for more chapters! ?
I... remember thinking of writing a 5 star review for this. But I dont either.I dont. Its weird... ha 5 stars. Its amazing wonderful.
You've something going here to be honest. Just a little feedback on your writing style, call me old school, but try to avoid writing in short forms and numbers. Spell out your words and numbers like, instead of 'U', write 'you'. Instead of 15, spell it out fifteen. Otherwise, it's a good start. Will read more.
I like how descriptive the story describes the monsters and characters plus the story instantly got dark and I love it. This I have to keep a eye on
Ok, I'm just gonna say this first; the story of this book is great, but the grammar is not really the best, which can lead to confusion. Some words are misspelled or misplaced, and the point of view switches from first to third person every now and then, which can lead to confusion.If you get past that, the overall story and world development are really good, but I wish the first arc was a little longer. I think it would've been nice if some hero sealed her up so you could see the demise from the antagonists point of view, but the end of the first arc was still satisfying. The second arc is also really good, in my opinion, but in this arc, the grammar worsens. Overall, it's a really good story, but the typos need fixing.
One of the best novels that I read ………….
Rate it as you like and I'm thinking this as my story cover
A demonic novel with a heroine who has a traumatic past? ??The explosive drama is good which drew me in.Keep it up!
Who are Rose’s parents and it’s unfair for her family to treat her like that.
Been reading this for a while now, got to say, It isn't entirely the worst. I mainly came here through word of mouth, and I must say, it isn't disappointing so far.Hope more folks check this out, be great to see it blow up if its worth it.
good read so farmc pretty much begins with sad story only for 1 ch, I guess that was author's way of torturing us readers or give satisfaction when he rejects the girl. Mc quickly accepts idea of new life and doesn't dwell on past.
I sighed. "So Writerz, have you done the homework?"