Reborn as a Cyborg

I have been into video games for a while and to be honest, I am absolutely amazed by seeing what the book has to offer. It may have a few weak points here and there but I think it would do amazing with better editing.best of luck author san

From the very first time I rest my eyes on you, boyMy heart said follow through but I know nowThat I'm way down on your lineBut the waiting feeling's fineSo don't treat me like a puppet on a stringBecause I know how to do my thingDon't talk to me as if you think I'm dumbI want to know when you're gotta come, you seeI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveCause summer is hereAnd I'm still waiting thereWinter is hereI'm still waiting thereLike I saidIt's been three years since I'm knocking on your doorAnd still I can knock some moreOoh boy, ooh boy, is it crazy look, I want to know nowFor I to knock some more, you seeIn life I knowThat there is lots of griefBut your love is my reliefTears in my eyes burnTears in my eyes burnWhile I'm waitin'While I'm waitin' for my turn, you seeI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveCause summer is hereAnd I'm still waiting thereWinter is hereI'm still waiting thereLike I saidI don't want to, I don't want toI don't want to, I don't want toI don't want to wait in vainI don't want to, I don't want toI don't want to, I don't want toI don't want to wait in vainIt's been three years since I'm knocking on your doorAnd still I can knock some moreOoh boy, ooh boy, is it crazy look, I want to know nowLike I said, the tears in my eyes burnTears in my eyes burnWhile I'm waitingWhile I'm waiting for my turn, you seeOoh boy, ooh boy, is it crazy look, I want to know nowFor I to knock some moreIn life I know there is lots of griefBut your love is my relief

Its basicly ,a sign in novel 10 years in the story and he is already Op.I really like it, because die MC is cautious and (trys) Not to me Trouble, so its a relaxing novel as a hidden boss.the Bigest downside is that the chapterorder is wrong and that is confusing.

It was intriguing from the beginning chapter itself. Action! Yup just my kind of thing. I'm really very happy to read and review your work. It's just Mamamia!!!! Keep it coming. Feed me more. Author, are you a magician? The scenes with detailed explanation just transmigrated me to your world. Haha. Loved it.Not giving any spoilers so that your readers won't pass from here itself and will read it. Do read it people it's worth your time.

I honestly have a heart for this kind of stories. The first chapter was already intense, the second hits the emotion, and the story's progress is amazing. A story full of action, yes! Character depth, yes! There's a few punctuation errors, but overall, it has the potential! :)

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