So excited to read the sequel to strongest guild master. Currently at about ch21 so far so good great beginning to set you the story can wait to see how far max goes.
an interesting concept for the story..love the way it builds up anticipation.. looking forward to the next update down side is the long waiting period for the next chapters.. this novel will be ranked among the top if it has many chapters
nice work author..... l really like ur writting skill as well.. and the story is very interesting... plzzz keep uploading more so that l can read more....all the very best and do upload more... l can't wait to read what the story....
It is unfortunatly very bland. after mc initially fights back against bullies after getting stronger he just doesn't do anything... based on his background he should be filled with anger and thoughts of revenge.. but nope. nothing. everyone who bullied him, teachers who ignored it, parents who underfed and completely ignored him, brother who despised him. nothing. no mention of his emotions/plans. Additionally, there is no drive to grow stronger quicker by seeking out opportunities to absorb mana from people (bullies would be the prime targets, and he could do it outside of school avoiding the excuse of a teacher detecting it) or by getting his hands on beast cores. mc is content with living a normal school life and working a normal part time job to pay the rent. thus we just get normal school arc, taking classes, small duels and stuff. all this while an actual tournament arc is looming in the distance, which I cant imagine will be any better.Bland is the best word I can think of to describe it. With that said, the premise and writing quality is good and the story is by no means irredeemable if author better explores the emotional side of the mc. Either by having him use his newfound powers to get revenge (I feel like it would be reasonable for a kid in his situation to let the power get a little bit to his head and walk down a darker path) or by clearly motivating to the reader why this isn't happening, maybe he is struggling with such feelings but is able to hold the back.
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Among the best realistic scifi ive ever read, how the story moves, the filler (fluff-potential) chapters with the female lead, the scientific and technological details, the world itself, wow just amazing...really recommended thank you author for bringing this piece of literature to life.
Your writing can improve. But The writing flow made me easy to read and understand about the characters and everything. I can imagine them as I read it. Your writing is neat and clear.Keep it up!
The synopsis attracted me and the story itself made me stay. I really love this novel and the chapter release rate of the author is also so fast. Please don't exhaust yourself Mr. author and I really hope the novel keeps going. I will not talk about the story as its just better to go and read it instead. I'll be just spoiling the good fun.Keep up the good work!
The writing quality is pretty amazing compared to the other novels. The update stability has so far been stable at 7 per week and ik its quite a lot but i like the novel so much that i would like even more. The story development is perfect, neither too slow to get boring nor too fast to skip details. The character developmeny is admirable as it provides a lot of story to most of the side characters, they would also have emotion so they arent just NPC-like. The world background is pretty good at it involves the Mc’s neighborhood as so far, leading to the entire world and also hints on the entire universe being involved. Overall i recommend this novel greatly to anyone who likes action, a smart mc, an mc with good power but also has lots of room for development, a cold blooded mc and Etc. Anyways thanks for reading this review and I hope the author never drops this!
Really addictive reading. It pisses me off to see a work of such high quality not get many views, while complete crap novels get so many just for including a system. This is a great read, and more people should check this out. Really have to feel for the young protagonist. He is a magnet for suffering. Great lively opening too, with the kid's village getting decimated. Well written, perfect pacing and fantastic world building. A top tier web fiction for sure.
Well, first off I wanted to elaborate It's pretty fine read, that feels like a proper light novel with just some minor problems. Like logic behind characters actions really screwed, and because of this author have some need to explain how they come to this. A lot of lucky moments, that you could see from just a glance that it's forced. Now more of personal preference.I don't understand how you created it. It's basically shounen cliches stories with sprinkle of smut and a lot of cringe. Mc? Beta guy with wild demon inside of him. How wild demon in him? As far as Japanese cliche allowed him. Just a guy that doesn't afraid of fighting and peaking out girls. With morales and need of showing off and being a hero? Oooph...How good characters? They do dumb stuff regularly, for the sake of a story. I don't know, not sure. How good lewds? Well, if you close you eyes on a lot of cringe lines of mc, and skip his thoughts. It's very mild, I never understood why Damien wild, when he is quite prude and gentlemanly.In the end, it's a huge disappointment in smut area, and as a proper story. If you read some harem light novels, you already see those characters, situations, and already could predict where and how, main character get his mental growth. The worst problem, you still need to read about mc, when there is better character which is Damien.P. S. Did we return in 2013? Where those things where popular, it's even called new and fresh... Bruh.
The story has a lot of grammatical issues. There was some sentences that could have been worded differently for a better story flow. A few words were misspelled, and transitioning to the next scene is kind of hard to followed. But, every authors is bound to have a lot to a few writing issues. No one is spare! I have never seen an author with a grammar-free story before. With that said, my honest thought is....I'm a big mythology lover! love, love, love it! This story is right up my ally! I like how the author indicated which gods or goddesses is which, and power. But in the long-run it might be harder to remember which god and power they are.The author could make a page, listing them all or remind the reader at the end of each chapters ( this might be a bit much). Another thing is the characters. They were appearing one by one, but for those that were introduce at the beginning beside the gods, it was a bit hard to follow. I would think, for me, is that the pacing was a bit too fast. Especially, the emotional distress that Sol had when he was desperately searching for Anya. A short description about their relationship would be great in supporting his action. I feel like there's more it than just a simple teacher and student relationship. There were a few plot hole that I found to be inconsistent, but the story is still in development , so scratch that. Maybe, there's a plot twist that the author is planning on later. In overall, even thought there are grammatical issues. That could be fix, so there's no need to worry. Beside that the author is doing great! Keep up the good work!