MichaelWho
I like it where can i continue to read it?? ??
This book is fantastic!I've only read through the first 12 chapters, but I can already tell that its got lots of potential. The story is a very interesting take on quite a "cliche" idea. It isn't your typical 'generic' plot line where the one-sided MC aimlessly uses his powers in his quest for 'revenge' and manages to succeed at everything he tries.Instead, the author creates a realistic and broken MC, whose character development is some of the best I've ever seen. As I read the story, the descriptive imagery and heartfelt language drew me into the character's shoes. I felt deeply immersed in the MC's emotional ups and downs. The story felt real. At the same time, the plot line continued to intrigue me as I read. While the pacing begins quite slow, the author adds small details that create suspense and also give the opportunity for the plot line to go in many different directions.I'm really looking forward to see where this story will head. Keep up the great work Author!
In the past I had rated this novel quite highly, but as of chapter 200 I’m beginning to get fed up with how the book is written.The system quickpy becomes irrelevant and there is no progression on that end nor is it even mentioned hardly at all. His medical skills? Also essentially become obsolete except for every 50 chapters he will maybe do a dissection.The MC has turned into some mystical detective who continuously gets led around by his nose by all these different organizations who make him constantly have illusions.Literally. Half the book from chapters 50-200 is just the guy having illusions and suffering. His abilites help him hardly at all and he remains a weak character all throughout. Even when the MC strengthens himself, its all for naught.The MC is a powerless character who just follows a line others have set out for him and everything he does is all calculated by others.Its the same shitty feeling as 008 in Lord of the Mysteries where everything the MC does is just what the quill writes. I’m not even able to articule in words the feeling other than just how disappointing and unenjoyable it is.
Great First chapter. Little to no grammatical errors. A novel about vampires is always am interesting one. I like how you have described things in detail as well. Looking forward for more chapters :)
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At first I thought it's even worst then 'Summoning the Holy Sword' as it's badly executed. It tried to be 'Amber Sword'. What made 'AS' good was not explosive knowledge but how he used it. I can't help but find 'Night Ranger' better than this one. MC- This MC is very egoistic and keeps repeating the same mistake of being caught everywhere because he doesn't keep his mouth shut. I don't like how he uses his knowledge as it feels too forced.But honestly, it does get slightly better around the 50's, to the point where I want to read more of this story. I see a lot of potentials but at the same time I don't want to get my hopes too high if MC keeps messing up like this. But if he shows improvement then I think this story worth reading. But hey at least this is not Harem right? There might be a chance it's good..
This story feel like i am skipping too many thing..........???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I finished it literally now, and for christ's sake, Ann-nim, you really got the recipe to make a good shit because girl, you got me addict. This was my best find here so far, and wow... fucking good.
