MichaelWho
Personally, I love this book. it's a masterpiece although I've seen the idea in some other books it's still amazing reading it. Please don't stop updating, Mage, or I'll...- *cough*Back to the topic, don't stop writing!
Ive read 47 chapters so far. This story is pretty entertaining. However my biggest issue is the lack of detail.. especially involving sexual things between the MC and the witches. Its simply a waste of potential. Its not enjoyable. Just a bunch of hints at what they are doing instead of giving the readers juicy scenes. Kind of lame.
Very promising. More muscle brain please and thank you!
ok, not to knock this book, but we were 3 deep in the voting pool, with actual novels that won voting not getting chapters right away, because others, like this one, jumped the order??idc which books you actually end up choosing, but having a user involved system and ignoring it is much worse than not having a system at all
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(fully caught up on raws) This is the best of this genre that's not a premium exclusive. The main pairing is awesome and the girl is not a prop. The comedy relief is 10/10. So far, the story is not repetitive. The main arc that connects all worlds is super interesting and will absolutely suck you into the plot. One of best offers in a long while, recommend voting for it.
Despite the familiar trope, the author manages to maintain a fine balance with the MCs power up. Talented but not OP. The story so far sidesteps pointless face slapping and overwhelming drama to create a believable world and a story that could occur in a fantasy cultivation setting.A rarity in the genre... I will wait the 2 to 3 months this takes to get released. Fingers crossed.
So far i found the plot interesting.its a bit to early to say about the what is going on.the games in novel are simple but with a twist interesting.I hope that more the games related chapters.
5 stars because unbeelievable for slowing us to make a good bee good novelf I'm bad at puns good novel tho :)
DAYUM. I was totally scared out of my pants when i woke up this morning and founf your work deleted. I found thisbl again thankfully and read the chapters I hadn't yet......... AND I LOVE IT.... WE HAVE AN OFFICIAL SHIP NOW ??. HOPE I SEE THAT COUPLE MORE IN THE LATER CHAPTERS. PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING. DONT STOPPPPPP
It's a fun read if you are into the OP MC but the novel literally changes in chapter 70. It turns into a whole different story all together. It's not only for one chapter the new novel carries on from there without going back to the original story. WOULDN'T RECOMMEND UNLESS YOU WANT TO WASTE YOUR COINS.
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