If you can get past the dumb points of this novel then your golden. 1: How is his family broke when they should be rolling in money? 2: why are his so called friends making fun of him for working at a racetrack? I don’t really get what’s so funny it’s just another cliche with no reason to it and why’s he embarrassed to work there? Makes no sense. 3: his sister is just dumb get rid of her. 4: he works as a marshal for one day and gets hit by a car? Okay.
The storyline is good. It's the type of book I'd read but author consider editing more before posting
This book has the potential and it was worth my time reading it. The grammars are ok, some mistakes here and there but it doesn't matter, at least I could convey what they meant
Can any lost soul give me such a story where MC only cares about power and can do anything to reach his goal (except RI).
Hmm, how should I say i don't know but why i mean why you make his mother her soul mate . It's kind of okay but not that much but again conversations are awkward and why his mother's olmost every sentence end with ❤️?
I like most of the thing in this novel except the tortoise ? speed of update. It’s been 9 days since the last update. Very disappointing
Just gonna say it first, underrated. VERY underrated.Now let's do some (mostly impartial) pros and cons:PROS: - It's FREE. I mean come on. At least at the time of this review, all chaps until now (ch 231) are free to read on webnovel. Major plus. - The characters and their interactions actually feel realistic. You can imagine most of the scenes naturally taking place. - No harem. No 1️⃣8️⃣+ stuff. There hasn't even been romance yet, which I'd say seems like a good choice considering the MC and others' current natures. - Though it isn't showcased in the early chaps, MC is very intelligent when it comes to schemes, money and serious fights. He isn't weak, but there are many opponents stronger, so he makes up for it with versatility, wits and being over-geared. - MC is more sociable than many MCs I've read so far. However, his 'friend circle' could've been better. That's all I'll say. - Oh, and he has a sentient system (which isn't stupidly OP, or OP at all for that matter) whose existence he prefers to ignore most of the time (because of its high-cost functions). It's slightly annoying, but don't worry, u rarely remember it's there - Not a major spoiler, but the MC's hobby is cooking, and no one can deny his skills in this department. The descriptions get my mouth watering often (but can occasionally get annoying when I want progression). - Arcs where MC hides his identity are ones that I really like as that's where he really shines. (Rare yet enjoyable moments of non-cringe coolness and domination) - Barely any noticeable info dumps.CONS: - Personally, the cast introduced until now has mostly annoying personalities (probably deliberate, but still). Some of the most recently introduced characters just seem like annoying extras whose conversations or fights I had barely any interest in. On that note... - A couple of arcs have exasperatingly fewer MC scenes relative to the side or mob characters. (Like "THIS MOB FIGHT SEEMS SO POINTLESSLY LONG! JUST GIVE ME MORE KAEL SCENES!!" level of exasperation) - The pace and progression are noticeably slow in the earlier chaps but get better in the later ones. - Sometimes, the MC suffers because of ridiculously petty company. Tho, this should be solved with a bit of character-dev. - Unfortunately, Kael ain't the best looker in his transmigrated body (find out for yourself how bad it is) and... LOTS of characters let him know that. My beef is with the second fact. I think he might be improving though. I'll be satisfied as long as the ugly-hate is reduced tho.IMPROVEMENTS: - I guess the characters' appearances could be mentioned or implied a bit more often (I don't have clear images of them in my head). Not on a crazy level (like hair and eye colour mentioned every other chap) tho. - The descriptions are well done when used at the right place and time. But sometimes it goes overboard and too repetitive. Try decreasing the assistance of the AI maybe, author? - Lastly, I guess the world and creature building as well as power scaling could be elaborated more.That's about all I can think of right now. Hope it'll help any readers as well as the author. You're welcome ?.
it's a good novel held back by its writing quality.it seems translated or written by someone who has never spoken english.
"Did you know the creatures that can speak, but unhearable?"
I immediately drink a water and say goodbye to my father.
???:"Ahh..So your name is Bora? Mine is Jungkook....Jeon Jungkook"
Edric wasn't large enough to take down any soldiers so he shadowed Tom across the battlefield violently smashing the enemy's legs while Tom did the heavy fighting