Welp..NGL the First 250 Chapters are great.. The Plot and story is going well untill this Esmeralda thing come into play... Sorry Author but I feel like the Arc Quality drops drastically when MC got abducted by this disgusting Vice president.. It's great but meh.. This really ruins my mood... Goodluck
This book makes me want to rip my hair out, it was good at the start, but then there is a 12 year time skip. After the skip the story isn’t nearly as entertaining, and the chapters keep repeating and retconning things that just happened. One chapter will end with x character being knocked out in a room. To them have the next start with the same character outside prior to being knocked out except this time they don’t get knocked out. Or they will be going to the capitol for a ball “in a few days” to then not go to the capital right away, and when they get there they go “we have to leave because we don’t want to be near the royal family.” It’s stuff like that, that really kills my enthusiasm for this book. Though Mary is very entertaining.
Looking forward to the journey of Rose between the realms
Writing is my passion not my job. This piece is a product of my dedication and not obligation. Every character is relatable to someone out there and you just need to find yourself inside this imaginary world I created.
I can't continue reading without writing a review. Oh my gosh! are you a professional novelist? your novel is so amazing that I can't help but read it continuously! I love ittttttttttt
I totally love your use of words, your metaphorical expressions and how real and authentic you are, you’re doing a good work here, I just hope you would indent the paragraphs properly , it makes reading easier. Either ways , I going to see the end of this book. You can also check out mine; A Millionaire Up North, and leave a review , I’ll do much appreciate that.
I am in live with Gravil already?.The book is very unique as should be expected. would certainly wait on more episodes.
Author here, this novel is my first creation. I can’t even believe that I created something?.This story is about Tim. A boy that had a not so pleasant growth at first.A boy willing to learn and do anything to achieve his goals.A boy that so desperately wants to break the chains of Oppression.A boy that wants to climb to the very Peak of Existence.Our boy Tim is definitely going to be OP, but is being OP enough to survive?This Fantasy book has Action and Adventures. Mostly Action. Let me be the Author you come to when you need to read some blood thrilling piece(❁´◡`❁).
I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more.May this book's popularity rise in the future! The conversation needs work if you want people to be more interested in the story's potential, thrilling action, and enigmatic character. I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more.May this book's popularity rise in the future!
Real nice starting, beautiful progression
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