The dialogue in this text is so restrained it's almost painful. Everyone is holding back, and that's where the real conversation happens. Take Chu Nanyu. He says almost nothing and every word lands. 'Have breakfast.' 'Hold on tight.' 'As you wish.' Three words, four words, two words — but they carry so much weight because of what surrounds them. His dialogue is sparse because he doesn't need to fill space. He's the kind of character who speaks only when necessary, which makes those moments infinitely more powerful. Lu Yanzhi's dialogue is equally telling in what he doesn't say. 'I'm Lu Yanzhi.' That's it. When Tan Qinyin doesn't recognize him, he doesn't beg, doesn't explain, doesn't break. He just states his name like a man trying to hold onto something by the thinnest thread. And later: 'You're saying I should calmly watch as my wife calls another man husband?' That's the only time we see him truly lose composure, and it comes out as a question — not an accusation, not a shout, but a broken inquiry. That's such good character voice. Tan Qinyin's dialogue is the most natural and lively. 'Husband, my whole body hurts! Hold me, please.' 'Husband, can you carry me?' 'Your hands are really beautiful.' She's spontaneous, physical, affectionate — and the dialogue reflects that completely. Even her WeChat messages feel real: the firework emojis, the spinning emojis, the casual 'Mm-hmm.' She sounds like an actual person, not a novel character. Tan Yan is the mediator voice — calm, explanatory, trying to hold everything together. 'I know you're uncomfortable, but given Yinyin's current state, this is the only way for now.' He's the glue, and his dialogue reflects that: practical, reassuring, always moving the situation forward. The narrative voice itself is worth noting too. It's close third person, drifting between characters' internal states without ever fully settling in one head. We get Lu Yanzhi's clenched knuckles, Chu Nanyu's stiffened back, Tan Qinyin's physiological redness at the corners of her eyes. The narrator observes everything but judges nothing. That restraint makes the emotional moments hit harder because the text doesn't tell you how to feel — it just shows you what's happening.
looking good !! waiting for more!! let see the betrayal
sue me?try it though, you will definitely like it
Four chapters down and I had to rush to leave my review before I get so engrossed that I end up forgetting to do anything else.I'm totally hooked by the story. Lots of love author.
Ok this is messed up, this yuno s life, shit I can relate, hopefully I don't get run down by truck kun, that is the most legendary anime mythical God lol ?????????
Honestly, I'm obsessed with this story . It's not everyday that you see a relatable story. If you can relate to one-sided love, you should read this .
I think a good book should be exactly like this.
books nice , its casual and not uselessly big on details according to me , last i read and now that I read it again , the author has reworked the free chapters and it's better now this way , Appreciate your work author , keep up the good work.
Don't really know much about this genre but the beginning is really good ? ?
Is there a relationship between the novel: "I can Use Filthy Game Skills In The Real World" and "I Can Use Filthy Game Currency In The Real World"Is it a remake?I read the free chapters from the first one The writing is good, but the sex act is very very long. It loses its fun when it goes on too long.
Other then the somewhat unstable uploads it’s a great story.
woooh it's hottttt...,.......love it ...