Title: 我竟然能带出游戏物品Author: 萌她爸Status: 343 Chapters and ongoingThe author's name translates as 'her cute father', I'm guessing the person setting up this page just made a small mistake when in a hurry to get them all ready. It seems to be fairly popular.
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This story seems to be a slice of life in a cultivation world. Story progress is quite slow and the daily life stuff is just too detailed. By chapter 20 I had already started skipping blocks of text looking for dialogs. By chapter 30 (raws) the skipping got larger and by 40 I could no longer continue. It's just too boring.....
haha , no cliches here . Yandre is in moderation and no harem with teacher and student even though there is attraction of students towards their beautiful teacher ?
Here I am, waiting for the next release, and writing this review in the meantime. I’ve decided to be succinct, so here it goes.
In terms of writing quality, it is not bad. Mediocre or even slightly above average. Compared to other novels I read on this site, prior to the creation of my account, it fares quite well, but not so well that it stands out. There are sentence structuring errors here and there and incorrect spellings for certain words/terms which slightly draws away from the experience. Not by much, but for a neophyte grammar critique, such as myself, the effects are significant.
In terms of consistency in updating, I can’t really comment much since I have been binge-reading up until this point, but over the past few days, I don’t think there have been any changes, although you are free to correct me if I am wrong. I have also not found any indication of the author’s update schedule or anything similar to estimate how many updates they are planning to make per week, which is fine, since some authors don’t operate on a strict schedule, but for me, I don’t find it particularly reassuring to not know how many chapters I should expect.
The story development and characters are by far the key elements here. They outshine the majority of the decent novels I’ve read in the past few months, even encouraging me to create this account for the sole purpose of reading it.
Both the plot and characters are unique and intriguing, the latter even more so. The experimentation of the dual-protagonist system is, in my eyes, a significant success on quite a few levels. The inter-personal dynamics were also highly well done. Especially in regards to the key characters and the main duo themselves.
Their decisions throughout the story are logical and more or less realistic, or at least in relation to a majority of other novels (I won’t mention any names) that allow their characters to go on multiple nonsensical jumps in logic to arrive at a certain outcome. Some might argue that there are too many time-skips in the beginning chapters and I will have to say that I partially agree. While I find it reasonable to skip over their infancy, the segment regarding the separation from the protagonists’ home town, for example, was done way too abruptly and glossed over in a few sentences.
The separation felt far too abrupt, even for me, considering the presence of Rean and his ‘filial’ sentiments.
That connects to the topic of the narrative’s world building. I can’t say the world building is average, per se, but it certainly isn’t top-grade, in my opinion. Of course, it is still leaps and bounds ahead of most other cultivation-type novels, but I feel that even taking into account the ignorance of the twins and their non-existent information network, the world seems a pinch too shallow in my eyes.
Also, I feel the need to applaud the author for not developing any form of romance. Thank you for that. Really, I mean it. Though, as soon as any semblance of romance shows it’s disgusting face, I will be forced to drop this series, unfortunately. I am sick and tired of romance. It’s like a drug. You get a fleeting high when you start to use it, but then with continued exposure to it, not only do you become immune to it, it starts to become a poison for your mind and body. At least, that’s what I have found out.
Overall, it is a great novel, but for whatever reason, it seems to be overshadowed by the authors more prominent work ‘Is that a Wisp?’, which I have not yet read, unfortunately. The pacing is great, and the balance between high-tension scenes and more casual scenes are very well done. The author has managed to find success where many promising others have found naught but failure.
In any case, I do hope for updates sooner rather than later. Those two are very interesting to observe.
Now again as fellow bros how can I not give my brother 5 stars but seriously.....you did a great job in this and also I can clearly see that you are improving your skills that's very nice....I hope you get contracted soon
first story that makes me actually like the MC as a human not as a character Tbh a lot of novels here are either edgelord guy or hero guy or the lovestruck girl with 20 IQ this one is the first that can actually be relatable if you were in the protagonists shoe's (she was bullied and stuff) I'm not really good at writing reviews and whatever but just wanna say that MC is relatable and cute and badass
I've read it until chapter 39, so far, I don't really like it tbh, there are some situations where the MC could have done it better, some weird things like calling the system DADDY or Keeps saying that his personality is like that because he's zodiac sign is a GEMINI which is kinda ridiculous.MC is smart but sometimes its kinda frustrating where the MC has a system with so much potential but he's can't really bring it into full play. Even the Readers in the comments have much more creativity and imagination than the MC.Its only interesting one I found is the setting where the MC as a Demon can be Summoned into another world and make a deal with Mortals, which he can exploit to gain more souls, troll people, or by spreading despair to make the souls with negative emotions becomes of a higher quality.This novel is not really that bad but its not that good either, at least for me.The main thing that turns me off is that I kinda find the MC lacking some of the Mentalities of a Demon, I know he's a human at first and have some human qualities but I got turned off when he used a Very rare high quality soul to make a pet just because he's lonely, sure he can use it as a battle companion but in that time he really doesn't need it and can use the very rare soul for a much better purpose but nope, he wants a dog because he's lonely. Maybe I'm just asking too much since I'm picturing an MC fitting of this novel should be the ones like Fang Yuan from R.I., since that would really bring the potential of this novel into full play.Maybe I'll be proven wrong in the later chaps, so please just reply to me if it got any better in the later chapters.
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This is probably the most underrated novel of its genre. The characters are well designed and are believable as humans. The world is very well designed and the comedy is on POINT. Its a shame for the whole industry that it seems to be dropped?. I’ll still wait for it to be updated and read it the second its updated once more.
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