I formed a fist out of my hand and hit the table with it. Luckily, the impact wasn't hard enough to make a cup of tea fall from it's place, or break the table.
Will might not understand the voice's issue with electronics, but the fact of the matter is cultivators and any other entities harnessing any kind of energy (except electrokinesis) hates electronics with a passion. For example, when QI (more than what is naturally present in the vicinity of the device) goes through the device they all short circuit or burst into flames, another reason worlds, planets, and realms with a lot of powerful cultivators lack technology, except when they discover on how to use QI crystals in place of mortal power sources, then find a way to use cultivation resources to make their own technology, not artifacts, something usable even towards people that cannot harness QI. Though, only cultivators can use cultivator technology to it's full potential, as it runs off of their energy directly.
After leaving the village, Way venture and fought with many beast along with way. He also formed his domain. After arriving at the city Way joined Cyan sect which has Emperors. He soon left the sect and continue his journey where he met a girl and they fell in love.
Sorry, could not read past the first few paragraphs. I started against better judgment seeing that every word in the synopsis started with a capital letter. That was not the case in the first chapter luckily, but upper and lower case are not used according to standard English. The formatting generally should be revised. The punctuation separates connected elements into different sentences. Dialogue is written inside the running text without markers when it starts or stops. Etc. I realise this might be due to translation from a language where punctuation and other formatting rules are different. But it takes a lot of energy to figure out the text when it doesn't follow common writing rules at all, and the risk that the reader abandons it instead is big, which is a pity as the story itself might be good (I marked the other categories as "3" as I could not judge them.)
The story is worth the time I just need her to update regularly
Interesting story, a hidden gem.. although it's slow-paced story, you'll never regret reading this
This reviews is made after reading up to chapter 23 of this novel, so spoilers and misunderstandings is definitely going to spawn if you don't know the context, but this is how a really good author sparked a reader to push him to write a long comment on chap 23 and leave a review for you all to see.Copy pasted my comment:Not gonna lie, when Julia went berserk I picked up some yandere vibes from her, and when she got the idea to kill Lars to earn his love from Ellen (ingame, but this could develop to real life consequences) I imagine myself in MC's shoes and got all this god view information like us readers, walked up to Ellen, ? slapped her face and straight up yelling at her face about developing some yandere tropes to his middle school friend who is head over heels over my other best friend.This awoke some burning feeling in me as a reader but. Props to the Author for hinting at this but for the moment didn't develop to worse case scenario "yet".Haven't read further as the making of this comment, just wanted to write all my feelings down and continue on. But as a side note.I think that my "fears" are unwarranted at this point of time because the flow and writing of this scene,makes me feel like the author doesn't want to take the yandere traits to a dangerous consequence or conclusion in this point of time. Thank you for reading this spurr of the moment comment?, and huge praise for the author to write really likeable and relatable characters. Interesting story to hook me up and a great introduction to how an MOBA plays out in more indepth. (from a gamer that only scraped the surface on League and didn't invest time to learn the game. You, author has enlightened me to this amazing genre of games??. I encourage you to pick this novel up and read. Because it hooked me up with the story's great pacing and at the same time wonderful character and background development.
Interesting story concept, but some immaturity in writing technique that disturbs the flow for the reader. From switching between 1st and 3rd person perspective every paragraph or so, to restricted vocabulary and/or repetitive word use (eg nearly very sentence in a paragraph starting with or exclusively using the pronoun, ‘she’). For me, this many grammatical issues in the opening chapters has me dropping the book and leaving a cautionary review for those readers who find these kinds of consistent flaws to be off putting too.
Exceptionally Intriguing and Beautifully Written so far. Looking forward to him evolving with the Holy blood physic as well as mastering more of Master Bahun's skills
i forgot the summary of this, cause the start was good but after reading this far(chapter 42) I think this isn't for. this is just Thor to me if in marvel? and i don't like him muchps. gudluck
I've read up till chapter 42 and I've got to say I'm highly intrigued by the story so far even thou it's nothing super original it is captivating with each of the main characters so far having their own personality and their traits impacting their decisions.
Of you want something new, something refreshing and interesting this is the best one you can find. Of course, there are mistakes here and there but I find this novel pretty intriguing!?