very awesome story but wishing I could read it with out disturbances oh and more chapters please. Lol
Really cool story! I haven’t read a vampire fantasy series in a while and the world seems very intriguing in terms of lore and potential! now I’m wondering how everything will turn out in Lyras story
Oh. My. God.
I've only read up to chapter 7 (still reading) but I just had to run and leave a review. This book is amazing and extremely captivating from chapter one. I literally could not put it down, I didn't even notice when one chapter would end and another would start because I was so drawn in.
We've only met the characters Daphne and Atticus for a bit but their personalities and the way they interact are already on full blast. Your writing style is so good and the storyline and use of foreshadowing...amazing. I cannot wait to see where this story takes me.
Amazing work, Author!
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Please finish this novel
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wowwww i thinkkkk it needed moree improvements
Sobresaliente! Nawa'y ipagpatuloy pa ang sulating ito, tunay kong ikinagalak nang simulan kong basahin. Mabuhay ka, kaibigan!
Ang bayan kong Pilipinas, lupain ng ginto't bulaklak. Pag-ibig na sa kanyang palad, nag-alay ng ganda't dilag.
Quite entertaining, in terms of the sports novels I've read, this ranks near the top even with the quasi MTL nature of the writing (honestly not that bad, but maybe i've read too much MTl). I can't specifically that there are parts were the novel particularly excels, but the everything is quite satisfactory and there are no real problems I have with it, also the main character is not intolerable and actually somewhat acts his age. There is a sprinkle of racism/political agenda, but that was mainly against a hong kong team, so far there hasn't been any international play, so this maybe become more prevalent. I do like that they are other characters around the MC and it's not just him by himself, I hope that the 2 other guys in his team also follow him, at-least to the CBA or maybe national team?Overall, pretty entertaining!
Not anything crazy but a decent story coupled with a good translation. A light and fun read.
not gonna lie lost some brain cells reading some parts of this.
Now this is what I like, the story is simple yet effective the emotions of characters can be felt easily and the author had done a great job portraying scenarios