I have read all the chapters which are published till now. I can assure you that, you would enjoy reading it. Everytime something new is introduced. And, the my most favourite is how Codex dodges the topic, when it is cornered.
Every book this author makes is mind blowing, you can be teleported into the story with out knowing, this book keeps you in the edge of your seat, check it out because The writing style = checkedThe world development = checkedLovable characters= checkedUpdate stability = checkedthere isn't anything wrong with this book, so do check it out.
Already falling in love with plot...can see potential twist though. Nice work author, keep it up.
All in all, it is a good story but some proofreading is needed
I like it so far but will the MC have different races is his harem just in stead of just lions
Author here shamelessly giving myself 5 stars. For more content on my book, check out my other review. I have them separated because some people do not like reading even a bit of a spoiler!Anyway, if you only read this review, I hope you enjoy my book!
The story is there but I think the author is trying to get to major plot points too fast and is missing filler pieces to expalin certain actions or decisions or the absent background info that would make us like a character, some things are just blatantly looked over by characters that should be more aware obvious actions that most people would be wary of, and while I enjoy harems the heroines are just falling for a guy with no actual basis, I get the girlfriend and childhood friend but the pro hero speedster maybe should of started as just a fan that slowly became infatuated not in love after a short stream.On the plus side though the story has great bones and with some more fleshing out could be awesome, the system need more moments where Scott actually studies it and figures out how his ‘super power’ works (can’t tell me he’s just accepting a random power system in a society that is stated to have interdemsional warlords and aliens) I expect him to be more aware of the system that is suddenly predicting crimes and has the word ’harem’ in its name, possible mind control and what not are on the table in superpowered worlds.The heroines have some decent backstory building but Maya’s choices are just all over the place, and Emma is just unexplainable as I refuse to believe a flash level speedsters is going to be unable to clean sweep a whole city in seconds to look for someone as she stated herself to be ‘faster then light’ that level of speed is absurd and overpowered that I find it hard for her to not find Scott in seconds of seeing the stream, she herself stated she knew where his first stream was as it was in her ‘patrol’ area so she must have an idea of major and minor parts of the city or can easyily look up a street sign or building and shop names.The stream it’s self just need more detail, does it blur identify features like a location or features to keep Scott’s secret, does it give out minor missions, what all does it sell and when does Scott buy his stuff, the watch he used comes out of left field or was just too small a part to even notice yet it’s a major tool he uses when he saves Elena. What does the system do and what are its defined rules.Scott himself just seems kind of all over the place, bro is supposedly intelligent yet I have yet see him do anything remotely smart as he just seems to go with the flow and whim of the system and not ask any questions and as a vigilante is doing zero prep work or investigation work into criminals or ‘black mechanica’ an organization that supposedly has alien tech and nuclear capabilities and has been running around heroes for years and you expect me to believe his one foray into them is causing them a lick of trouble, it’s stated they are a global organization, one guy in one city stumbling on a cell isn’t going to do anything but annoy them, and get a small bounty of ’Nightwatch’, they’ve had to have dealt with things like him before just from how many superabled people there are now, plus his back story is just missing, why is his mom import or even where are his parents, is there some family situation we should be aware of.Vincent is just not fleshed out and too stereotyped, I believe him a bad guy but I think he’s also being too obvious with it, more subtle gaslighting and less outright bastard and his character improves dramatically as he pushes a wedge between maya and Scott instead of one asshole phone call.Mostly the story just needs filler to help flesh out the world and characters, little Paragraphs to explain actions or choices that build a character and help the reader understand character motivations.Maybe a side piece chapters for none important characters to help flesh out the sudden hero streams effect on the wider population or maybe a few small time heroes using it to fund their own hero activities, maybe a few people who think like Scott following in his footsteps, maybe Emma doing her own stream disguised as a different vigilante like a dark speedster named Shade.In summary I like the story just wished it was more fleshed out as I keep running into the problem of doubling back and questioning when did this happen, ‘offscreen’ moments that confuse readers and just a lack of scenes that transition the story, I hope the writer continues to write and I’m going to continue reading the story and hope it’s fleshed our more later in the story.
While the story itself is really enjoyable there are some things that you should know. The update stability is really bad (if you read more reviews your gonna see), there was an update chapter where author made you spent coins for just to tell you that there is real life too and the story is now on Kindle Vella...., not a nice move and the chapter after that are apparently 60 coins (i only know of the one after the update chapter since i didnt continue at that point). So if you want all that with some enjoyment (if you like this kinda story your gonna like it i guess) go on but i would say its not worth it. sadly ?
I absolutely loved Echoes of Rebirth! From the moment I started reading, I was completely drawn into Alyan’s world. His struggles with self-doubt and his quest for strength are so relatable; I found myself cheering for him every step of the way. The essence cultivation system is fascinating, and the sense of urgency as the calamities approach had me on the edge of my seat.The friendships in the story add such warmth and depth, making it more than just an adventure. If you enjoy a blend of magic, heartfelt moments, and thrilling challenges, you need to pick up this book! It’s a journey you won’t want to miss!
Such an amazing book‼️ The creative take on fantasy themes is awesome. Surprising twists & turns and original thoughts. The romantic story line shows true depth and honesty. I grieve the end but am looking forward to this great author’s next book. Thank you‼️??♥️
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Great book, would really recommend it. Just wish it had more updating days.