The narration of the book is good but it could do a bit of improvement by being a bit interactive with the narration. Well, that's something I have trouble doing myself. Perhaps, breaking the paragraphs that got too long might help for the readers that were reading on the phone. The storyline is very unique and something I have never encountered before but the foundation or introduction of the system at the start of the story feels a little bit not enough. I only read until the first few chapters so it will probably be expanded more in the later chapters. Overall it's a nice read with some new and nice ideas.
Man enjoying this book very much. Wish there was more chapters but I understand that two a day is a lot as it is. No rush but just like to say that you got something good going here with this book
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wow.. great job author.. interesting story line...I will read it for sure till end...
I see the potential comming from this novel and I am telling you guys that this will be up there in the next few years. I hope he continues and gets more views and ideasThe Sippler
"Oh Ifritz desu," respond my friend.
And of course the world must have need a villain right? Because I really like to create something complicated, can i who the one that create villain? "
"Omawa mo shinderu," we closed the prayer in unison.
"Wow he knows that to? " RM
After opening her eyes, she waked herself up for real. She was in her room, lying on her bed. She felt strangely weak. She soon realised that there was an ice bag on her forehead.