Thid novel has a great vibe,with the university setting feeling real and the characters ,especilly kiyato and Miyano pulling you in.The tension between them adds a lot of intrigue if it add a bit more sensory detail and build on their emotional struggles ,it will be even more impactful. keep going!..
I just started reading this and am confused by something…..how can a goddess grant someone strength to someone so that they can kill someone she herself lost against, and let’s say she’s not giving him strength and only giving the tools he would need to build a strong enough foundation and he will rise in strength on his own…..why wouldn’t she use those tools herself??I will keep reading for now but I hope a good enough reason is there, it doesn’t have to be something complicated but at least the mc should question it and reason no matter how idiotic is given at least this will be better than just shutting our brain……….
Nice novel. Waiting for more chapters.
I'm sorry guys I will be uploading some chapters today remember all my works is what I have been writing for long, the posting of a lot of chapters should not amaze you thanks guys
Ayeee this is great! :DThe writing is awesome ngl hehehhe! And the chapters are sufficiently long, so me think it's good! :DCould use some proofreading here and there, but nothing major imo hehe! Still a smooth read! :DI like the world background too, it felt immersive reading this! <3 And likewise, the characters are likable tooo hehhehehe!Great work, author! <3
"A thrilling new adventure has just begun! Gripping plot, dynamic characters, and endless possibilities. Don’t miss out!"
Even though half girls characters looks more like males characters, and the MC is denser than me as a kid (roughly neutron star density), it's very usual, and often worse, in other Asians harem stories. At least the author seems to like developing his characters, which is good.Tldr : This LN is fun to read.
I think most of the reviews so far which were negative were mostly on the synopsis, which I agree could do some work on but does and should not bring down the opinion of this novel in any way. From the get go, the premise of the novel feels like it's a really fresh start compared to most other common ones and there's a lot of thought provoking ideas as I browsed briefly in the raws. It's really amazing. Cant wait for it!
"Absolutely loved this book! The story pulls you in right away, and the characters feel so real. Really liked this! Definitely worth the read – keep up the great work!"But can you update the chapters Faster ?
what do I say it's the best novel. it has no Yuri lot of r18 scene and lot of things.
i love it so far. But sometimes when im reading it feels so distant. But thats complain on high levels. Its written Great.
Great job! Loved reading it! Can't wait for the next part! The queen is really awesome in the story. She's the best character. She's super strong, smart, and kind. Every time she's there, the story gets better. She's really good at solving problems and she's always nice to everyone. The way she acts is really cool. She talks to others nicely and helps them when they need it. She's the most important person in the story. I'm excited to see what happens next and how she keeps helping everyone. The person who wrote the story did a great job making her. I'm looking forward to reading more about the queen in the next parts!