Loving the story It's a common plot, but the storyline is what makes this interesting. It's also good to see the main character mature. The world-building is amazing and just add some new twist and it will be remarkable. #Loveit??
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Hmmmm, One of my friends has written a good story, a tale of a man with a beast trapped inside of him, I can understand. The exploration of his development seems to be the main focus of the story.Good job Swan
Unfortunately had to quit after the first chapter.
I am confident in saying that whoever wrote or translated this didn't read it twice. All the errors made it jarring to read.
*Evaluation written at chapter 105*This is a real hidden gem ! I usually like my reviews to be long and detailed, so for those of you who want to read my wandering thoughts, just read this : if you are tired of omniscient killing machines MCs with a dumbass system, this western view on eastern cultivation fantasy is very worth trying !don'tOnce in a while, just when you look through all the trashy generic novels being picked up on this site everyday and decide it is a waste of time to search for a new readable novel, you stumble on something that makes you think "well, maybe there is still hope around here after all..."This novel is one of those times.First of all, at least for me, NO FARKING SYSTEM ! The characters are talented, yes, but that's it. After that, they can only grow stronger with continuous hard work. No robotic voice in your head gifting you with a divine cultivation technique, a godly fist art or a heaven-grade flaming sword every two days. Just hard work. Basic, maybe too blunt for some, but precisely what I am looking for.The writing quality is the second big plus for me. I remember Chalky say it's his first novel, and God I wish I could write like that. The pacing is perfect, quite slow but I think it is the only way to truly bring life to the characters. They are very well written, each with their own distinct personality. The MC is not a mass psychopathic slaughterer, as so many others. In fact he could even be considered a good guy, just that he grew up getting used to obeying orders. Whatever they may be... but I have a feeling that may change in the future. He does not win every fight, and he doesn't always make the best decisions. Some comments say he is weak and stupid. I say he is human. And still a rather strong one. His main abilities and the techniques he acquires are are quite interesting, very unusual for the genre but quite well thought through.The story so far is interesting, and the world quite solid. However, as of now (chapter 105), the MC is just strong enough to start to have a real view on the continent and knows very little of what lies beyond. No arrogant young master needing a faceslap so far either as all characters, friends and foes, are rather well built and coherent.So is it perfect ? Obviously no, nothing is. But for now it is a damn good novel, and a refreshing version of eastern cultivation I, for one, very much needed.So thank you Chalky, and keep up the good work !
Its pretty original. Thats a rare thing on this site. Although i have read novels with similar settings in the past, they havent been quite like this. It feels a little similar to scholar's Advanced Technological system, but with less slice of life aspects
680 chapter from machine translation...The ending is quite disappointing because when shen lang get a dragon he meet with mulan after long separation just three day and they can't meet with each other again for hundred years and when they meet they're inside a spaceship, destination? Shen lang original worldShen lang father is jiang li, the one who dubbed as world's best emperor, but he is jiang xie the one who betrayed the antiquity empire, his soul after killed by shen lang mother stay inside shen lang and when shen lang meet with his mother jiang li's soul take over shen lang body's. A lot of plot twist but long separation between shen lang and mulan make me disappointed
Good story you should try to translate more I just can't wait to see the end and will it be a harem or R-18 scenes?? well you should add it if there will be girl but there are just too many choices
Wow, that synopsis was great! I had to take a moment to get my thoughts out about this book, as I'm reading it; A great read it is! I'm enjoying the storyline, the characters! everything! excited to see where it goes
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