fantasy world with magic and knight class + adventurer guild = martial art is common tag in this type of story, it's just this particular author didn't focus on that point.
wow.. just because he doesn't always shows his expressions and emotions you think he's just soul less coin counting machine? if you had at least finished the rose factory arc you would've seen that he also has emotions
anyway everyone has different tastes and I wasn't criticising your choice but just saying that you have the completely wrong impression of mc
Sauce?
it was soooo rushed
This is one of the best novels I've ever read. I hope that when this novel is done, they would make another basing on Lin Feng's children. That would be awesome, like boruto.
new dream job obtained
Yup confirmed I don't like how the author portrayed the character of the ml. The novelty of having funny characters also died down quite fast since the author didn't managed to keep it up especially for madam He who is really gold but became monotonous a bit later. It looks like the author lost the motivation or inspiration to make jokes that's why he focus it on the ml's flirty/pervert attitude towards the MC.Tbh, I'm here for strong female MC and face slapping but the ml who I don't even bother to remember the name repeatedly destroyed the story(again for me) and I might even dropped after a few chaps(now near 200). Then again, it should be because I'm just not use to this kind of ml and maybe after reading a few more then I would get use to it to the point of not even give a sht about them so yeah it's a no for now. I've read a few where there's a flirtatious ml but this is some of the even fewer novels I dropped because of those flirtatious(pervert) kind of MC.
Good so far, looking forward to more chapters
I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion.
I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling.
I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out.
The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel.
The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line.
Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest.
Give the novel a try!
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This is so goood!!! Keep it up bro the story and characters are amazing! I hope to see more from u ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo