Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
m pretty interested in the synopsis dont disappoint me. it could become a great smut novel with a interesting plot. the first few chapters seemed interesting and promising as i read them. so plz pump more chapters.
Amazing story line that keeps me up everyday???
Even though I'm still in the early chapters of this book, I can confidently say that this is a talent and a true hidden gem. The writing is vivid and full of life.I’m excited to see where the story goes. Keep it up; you’ve got a masterpiece in the making!
From the screen to the blade, to the grave, then the book Guess my plans weren’t as solid as they looked Always schemin’, but my group stabbed in the back Thought I was ruthless, turns out I was cooked See, I believed if I climbed up to the peak I'd own it all, but betrayal cut me deep Yeah, I killed the traitor, but karma wasn’t cheap Now I’m six feet under, and I can’t even sleepWoah-oh-oh This is how the story begins Woah-oh-oh Guess my life needed some high stakes Reborn now in some fantasy plot that my gf readThe same old goal, but with waifus I forgot I sought Beast girls , a system that's hot And a goddess with secrets, I can't smash Woah-oh-oh This is how my harem grows Woah-oh-oh Guess this is how I tame beastsFrom "kill or be killed" to "pet or hug" These overpowered bunnies got me questioning the end But I’ll rise to the top—yeah, again and again ‘Cause in this wacky world, *I’m the kingpin, my friend!* Woah-oh-oh Plot twists keep coming, who even knows Woah-oh-oh Guess this is how the story goes!
10/10 cant wait to see more. Hopefully he keeps writing, I hear he has good stuff planned. Maybe he is even working on it now, dun dun dun….
Great novel, where are you Author? It’s been 1 Month.Currently chapter 146 but I don’t want to continue knowing it’ll end in a bit :o
Really liking the book. Like the MC. Good concept. Gonna keep reading.
Very nice......................
It's a good read so far; the world background is still a bit vague, but maybe it is due to me still being in the early chapters. Story development is well-paced, but writer, you have to increase updating stability.Except for that, this is a story that has potential if properly written.
As of the time I am making this review ( 5/19/2023) i have finished 278 chapters, and all I can say is that I am amazed by this authors genius.For the review I will split it into 5 sections Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design.Writing Quality:5/5The writing quality is superb, The language and depictions on environments emotion and everything in-between thoroughly immerses the reader into the characters.Stability of updates:5/5as of 5/19/2023 the author updates the the story with a chapter everyday sometimes even multiple.Story Development:5/5The story development is phenomenal. It evolves throughout the entire story leaving the reader eagerly waiting for the next development. The author expertly weaves the story through the characters and unlike many other authors makes the story feel alive and connected.Character Design:5/5The character Design is the best part of the book the author not only explores the emotion and depth of the main character but others as well. Not only that but the character development of the main character is the best I have ever seen on webnovel, The main character goes through many struggles evolving his perspective on himself, the world and others. If you are looking for a purely evil main character this story is not for you. The main character is more than a villain. He is a human, he evolves and changes and although at some points he is villainous that is not all he is.World Background:4/5Although the World background is the worst part of the 4 other points of review it is still fairly good. The author does go into detail about the background of the world but in the grand scheme of the story I feel as though it's not enough. (spoilers ahead) The dimension's that the main character goes to don't have that much substance, you cant really feel the background that these dimension's have affecting the story in any tangible manner and you don't really feel engaged in what happens to the dimensions, For example the main character goes to a realm which is massive, thousands of kingdoms within a single empire, the leader of each kingdom being stronger than the main character. what's unfortunate is that you never really feel engaged with the empire/kingdoms. making them feel rather 1 dimensional. You really feel this 1 dimensionality when some kingdoms to war and you don't really care or feel intrigued about the outcome of the world. That being said I don't really think it dragged the story down that much because the story is more focused of the development of the main character and those around him.---------------------------------------------------------------------------Perhaps my thoughts on this book will worsen but so far this is one of if not the best stories on webnovel, would definitely recommend.
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