The book is phenomenal so far; be it mystery, thrill and the tormenting romance ,one will be able to see themselves in the character of Layla ?. I'm really excited for it . Let's see how this unfolds.
I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level
You've improved on your writingyour last novel was awesomethe only downside was the writingI'm genuinely impressed This is an interesting read didn't know I could actually love an isekaikeep up the good work
A reader from your previous work, good luck on your new book?
please update more chapters ?. am looking forward to it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?????
Loving this so far I lovvvvveeeee Nissa she’s so cute ? I can’t wait to see where this goes.?????????????????????????????????????????????????
I love it I'm not lying this book is good . The character the names and even writing style. You use poems. The most wonderful thing about this reading is that the author conveys that he is in full control of the story, taking it exactly where he had planned and not like many works that a compendium of recurring improvisation.
Considering the fact that I'm not really into magic stuff, I'm quite surprised that I like this book, even from just skimming through the first few chapters. It's a good storyline and I'm definitely adding to my library so I can continue to read. Good work!
I'll be utterly honest, I was like, a little bored when I started... actually, I thought I was not good.but going further, stuffs began to happen. and I find myself eager for more.I particularly like Pato.there's still room for improvements, but believe it's going to get better as we journey.
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me gusta , pero es muy cliché, no es algo malo pero el protagonista toma aveces unas decisiones que son muy convenientes o la historia en general se siente muy convenientes, y que siendo una habilidad sss tenga tantas limitaciones, siempre en todos las novelas de sss talent, siempre le ponen un montón de limitaciones y llega a parecer incluso peor que una habilidad s o menos, las limitaciones actuales están bien mientras el autor no ponga nuevas más adelante solo porque si.
An interesting read, not gonna lie I quite enjoyed it. While there are some mistakes in your spelling and grammar here and there, the overall story is still very much enjoyable.A few tips so you can grow. :)The synopsis is one of the most important element of your novel. It is imperative that it is perfect, without any spelling mistakes. :)