I’m loving the story and the constant updates, keep up the good work on that front. But I’m getting tired of the MC, John, getting blamed for everything even if it is for “comedic purposes”, it gets old.Besides that complaint, this is one of the better stories I’ve read (especially on this site).
Brain dead MC with an indestructible plot armor.People says don't go more than 3 meters deep (because its very dangerous) but he does anyway.Butts in to other peoples business for no reason and the only thing he gains is enemy.Has an opportunity to learn skills ; he chooses the books based on their names. Not even opening the book to check out the descriptions or anything.Not to mention author making mc's soul beast look like a joke so that others can mock him.OH and mc never questions about the world he lives in, techniques that he's using.(If you don't know, ask your teacher... smh)Don't bother reading this.....100ch+
I like to read cultivation stories, especially those that are light hearted with a touch of comedy. This novel have those things and I am very happy to leave my mark on this novel.May the author continue to do a good job and soar to the skies like a dragon. I look forward in seeing how the MC would become a dragon amongst men.
this is honestly a good book unfortunately the translation reduces it to the point that you have no idea what's happening and the only way you make any progress in this book is through one's own thoughts and understanding. unless you find other materials of this such as on reddit, the manga/manhua or a better translation it will become both difficult and somewhat tiring to make it pass the first dozen or so chapters.
You know man I'm having a hard time understanding why this series is so praised, I've read 2200+ chapters (mtl) and I can say w confidence that this series is at best average.Why? Well mate, let me tell you, it doesn't have a unique universe and premise like Daoist GU, the universe in which this series happens is your average Warlock of the Magus World like universe w a bit of D&D, with all of their tropes, even more, this series is nowhere near as satisfying or entertaining as WOTMW. The MC is boring, the series is overfilled with fillers, you know I never disliked fillers as I can understand to some extent why they exist but here we are overwhelmed by them like there are a hundred chapters of worthless filler.The MC is well, very bland and boring like he isn't anything special or noteworthy, you probably have seen a few other MC just like this one in some other series.My biggest problem w this series is by far is progression like it's so fkin slow, it's even slower than e frikin snail. This world supposedly has 7-8 ranks (not taking into consideration the additional apprentice realm, every magus starts from here) that we know of (it most likely has more), now let me ask you, how many chapters do you think it takes the MC to reach the magus realm, yes the first realm, the realm after apprentice realm?Did you say 300? Maybe 500, even 1000? NO, YOU ARE WRONG IT TOOK FKIN 2000 CHAPTERS FOR THE MC TO REACH RANK 1 MAGUS, AND THERE ARE AT LEAST 7 REALMS, 2000 FKIN CHAPTERS, and I'll let you know that your average web novel series has somewhere between 1000-2000 chapters, now can you understand just how bad the power progression is? You might think maybe he has some special skills that let him as a rank 1 magus to defeat those above him, but no you are wrong, the MC can't even beat a rank 2 magus. Yeah, 2k chapters and this is where we got, this is even more frustrating when the MC is surrounded and used by rank 2+ magus.So yeah, this series was decent at the beginning, I'm someone who doesn't mind slow development, Daoist Gu is the best example, it was somewhat slow at the beginning but in the end, it became insanely good, but here the author overdid it to such an extent where he broke the series... Like it took the MC 2k chapters to reach rank 1, then many how chapters it will take for him to reach rank 9, tens of thousands of chapters?So yeah in the end I would honestly never recommend this to anyone, it's way way way too slow placed and very unsatisfying, you would expect some mind-blowing story w so much development, but no we get none of that, it's just your average human mortal in his very slow journey to the apex.
The story has been interesting, looking forward to what's to come!???????????????????????????????????????
The story is comfortable to read, but there are a fair amount of grammar problems. We get a little snippet of most fight scenes and then the conclusion. I'd say the biggest issue is how every enemy is a total pushover. Someone shouldn't be able to give three full powered slashs before their higher leveled opponent could even react. Nearly every fight scene yet has such issues.
This novel has a very interesting concept and story. It is very refreshing to see something like this. The only problem is the author's writing style isn't the best, but I believe it will get better and they will improve tremendously with time.
Ch 1-40 great translation but ch 41 onwards translation takes a dive.Story it's self really interesting seems as if the mc taking the martial arts route in a cultivating world but still reach the peak of the world or so it seems would go. 4.8/5 But the translation ruins the story. The tl wasn't unreadable but name changes of cultivation realms, skills, and names.
the nice story drew me in immediately, the flow was amazing. The story has excellent character development, you become very attached to the main character quickly. good work author keep it up.
terrible
I have no complaints about the novel other than the stupid MC. (I suspect the MC is a girl.) The pace of events is good. The characters are colorful and pleasant. Characters with feelings and thoughts and flaws. I don't know why this novel is not widely read. But with a steady stream, it would make a great novel.