this is a nice story with adventure, casual plot, and smooth narration.The book has next to none grammatical errors, smut is above average, characters are not poorly written, story is smooth, not too serious, casual, and a great light read.Don't get discouraged cos of futa, Think of the character that can be a girl doing a guy, or a guy doing a girl.It's pretty good for a straight guy like me.Give it a try for 100 chaps, and you will know what I mean.
Mc is a wimp and his best line survive this and that and he keep saying sorry to everyone not my type of villain. I read till chapter 10
this is so niceee! pls update more chaps ?
How unrealistic, I'm going to complain like other people complain about good characters, I can't take seriously a world where the majority of people are evil.
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This will be one of my finest works to date and I hope you guys like it that's all.
Lena... She knows how to make a book that truly exceeds expectations. Although I am only a few chapters in, I can already tell that this book is going to be gold, and I am not saying this because she's a friend. I genuinely believe this book has something weaved within its pages that could change the FL industry into something more than just a sm*t or romance book. All I'm saying is that you should give it a try; be prepared to be quickly amazed, though, because I was. Good job, Lena, and I do mean that. 11/10 so far. Might be the first Webnovel I actually read for real on this app.
Sooo... Where do I begin? (First-ever review) If you haven't begun to read it, then you should! Although still in its infancy stage, it holds a lot of potential.I assume you all were attracted by the idea of a non-human protagonist and had a look at the synopsis, so I doubt I need to explain what it is about.The writing quality: at the time I am writing this, I am at Chapter 31, which shifts between present and past tense, which may deter you guys, but trust me, the author is trying their best! Other than that, nothing big has been able to break my immersion.Stability of Updates: I believe that the author has released a chapter or two every single day and will rarely take a break from it.Now for the last three! Story development: The story itself is still in the early stages, so there isn't much to write about currently, so no perfect 5 stars!Character design: Currently, John (MC) is still somewhat of a cub/child, so he has no overall big designs, but his current design is pretty cool, in my opinion!World Background: Kind of the same for this character in that not much has been told to us about it, even though it is pretty cool so far. So, while the world is still in its early stages and can be moulded by its readers, I suggest you go read it and give some ideas to our beloved author!Overall! A 4.2 for me as of Chapter 31 (most likely a 5-star once the story progresses a little more!) I fully recommend it!
This is very nice to read. Although, however, the chapters are a little short for my taste, and it's very fast pace. But other then that, I can't wait to read more of this book. Good luck
Just 15 chapters in and I am sicker into this fantasy world. Knowing this book is part of a series, I cannot wait to read the crossover. The style of writing is familiar and engaging like the other novels. Still the charm of fantasy draws me in the most. I cannot wait to explore more
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"-Desu," vaguely Kenji end the sentence.