BeastNaBh
I want to inform everyone that on December 31st, I will be rewriting the FIRST three Novels, ever wrote ad it will mark three years I have been on the platform and they will be available on Webnovel and Honeyfeed.
Hi author The novel you write is extremely nice. The chaps are also well written. I hope he makes more of them and continues his author job. May the stars align for him.
Yunno, I wasn't expecting much from the synopsis. I thought it would just be the usual outcast rising to glory story but I was wrong. Philip is incompetent only physically, his mind is nothing like that. I don't think his mother died from natural causes, i suspect that she was assassinated or poisoned because he couldn't rule and the crown prince would be of questionable birth if his mother wasn't the Queen.Moldovia's royalty, huh? she's a huge suspect, her son, Daniel and his father too. It's funny how peoples character change in the twinkle of an eye. one minute the maid's giving him an open invitation, the next she's glaring because he rejected her advances. An the ridiculous part is she thinks that he didn't see her. Just plain old greed for a prince who won't even ascend the throne.The plot is very rich. Keep it up, author.
I have come to a decision that I will drop this novel, Cuz I do not see anyone actually reading it and The current situation in my life not going well.I don't know if anyone will read this but if anyone does someday, I have one thing to say.Thank you for at least checking my trashy novel. I am gonna write a new one, that can quench the thirst of WN general audiences.I will drop 8 more chapters for 4 days. After that Bye.And Thank you to the ones who actually stick with me(If I had one).BYE
So, I was browsing and I came across this gem out of nowhere. And while it may not be perfect, it's way better than most of the original novels here. It's interesting and I read it all in one sitting. Give it a chance, I'm sure it won't disappoint.
The revoked a star from the writing quality is simply on grammar, and a few spelling mistakes. Some of your sentences are a little choppy, but other than that well done. I'm not sure on your stability in updates, so I just gave it a 5 as to not retract from your overall score. The story development is quite good! I really enjoy how the powers are presented and explained, and how in depth it goes. The character is well rounded, though in my opinion he is a little stupid :> Still, I gave you five stars because personal opinion shouldn't result in a retraction of a star. Through the chapters I read, it is very difficult to get a clear view of what is around the MC. I think describing the area more would help with that! It's not too bad though, so I only retracted one star. Well done :>
I 100% loved the story until one of the chapters said that Mc fiancé was raped by the nobleman, and I fu*king hate ntr. This was an automatic drop for me
MC plays betas without NPC's and quests.. just hunting & grinding levels lol okay. This novel is too one dimensional, characters are meh.. MCs character seems broken. It's not exciting to read at all
Fuck Qidian. Fuck Webnovel. This novel isn't on trial read anymore, so it's been dropped. They fucking do this all the time, drop the good novels that has one of the highest ratings and consumer reviews, but instead they pick some second rate shit. This platform is ****ed.
