this is peak author just don't drop it you know
Come and Go ..,...............,.....Bye?
Book managers to confuse and capture you since it's first chapters . Great plurality of characters, believable dialogues and autistic chemistry between MCs and their acquaintances . Wide range of topics touched upon with care and depth includes psychology, politics, philosophy, unconventional metaphysics, business and many more . Digest with care and this book can be a companion
Got to chapter 40 when the story started getting tiresome to read. Read to chapter 50 but the deadly sin arc came out of no where and every one of the enemies the imp talks to seems to be retarded. Sorry author not my cup of tea.
The story harbored a promising premise, but fell short of its potential. While the concept was intriguing, the execution lacked depth across various elements such as character development, kingdom building, and pacing. Although the main character showed promise, the supporting cast remained superficial.Similarly, while glimpses of a well-built kingdom were evident, overall depth was lacking. The storyline felt rushed, denying readers the chance to fully immerse themselves in the plot's intricacies. As the narrative progressed, the initial intrigue waned, leading to a gradual decline in engagement. Overall, while the book had potential, it ultimately failed to live up to it.
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
Reading Status: C21Writing Quality 5/5Stability of Updates 5/5Story Development 4/5Character Design 4/5World Background 3/5The total score: 4.2The writing quality is pretty good, so even with an instant google translation, I can understand everything perfectly, although a little more detail would be appreciated sometimes, you know. It is worth mentioning that sometimes more dialogue makes the interaction more organic, but it depends on the context, where sometimes the descriptions can say much more than a character's point of view. The important thing is to virtually understand the sensations described (as a reader), which makes everything better to enjoy.The upload stability is consistent, I can not say more.I can infer the development of the story, but I still look forward to seeing how it will be dealt with Kingdombuilding, one of my favorite tags. Which relates to the world background, well, while it's understandable that the central point of the story is the concept of the MC's system, the world that the MC will experience is still green.The character design is what catches my attention, and I can say that the author is consistent with this. I can understand that at some point there are always generic characters, and not all of them can be reflected by words like "alive" or at least dynamic, but from what I can see, I won't be disappointed. The "important" characters in the story will not be empty per se.The concept of the story is what fundamentally attracted me to read. The synopsis reflects well what you will find if you read this, so I won't beat around the bush. If the potential I see is used in the right way, this can be very good. #NoNTROtherwise, good job.
"Homework?" the Writerz answered innocently, as if his soul was holy.
"Fritz-Fritz, see there is sadistic sewing news," Said my Mother.
Okay let me change the condition.
And why is our world separated from the human world?
Jika yang dipikirkannya benar, maka semua NPC dalam Apakalipsis—kemungkinan besar—menjadi hidup.