This was just garbage what a waste of time
Grammar and choice of words are bad and I think it's common for starters but maybe will improve in future. As for other elements, I don't know how to give a review because I didn't really write a serious review. That's all and hopefully will improve in future. :)
There are too many of this kind of novel and it is getting worst each weekwhich is annoying asf.Don't even waste your time reading this novel. Just read an mtl instead.
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Anyone know the raw?
Shameless Author review here: This is my creative world. Anything and everything can happen here. The MC is not a dunce nor is he very smart. He's an average human who cultivates his Magic Arts till he transcends the Heavens and reach an even higher realm at the end. If you want a relaxing read, this might be for you. I've already plan finished several arcs of the future and my MC is still single because I don't know how to romance. So yeah, do bear with me till I finish the first volume. The real story starts at the 2nd volume.
This novel is promising. Although a few mistakes can be spotted, but the plot line is fresh and captivating. I hope you work more on this novel and give more attention. Your style sparks up a fire in the reader making me eager for more. Can't wait to read more!
does anyone have raw links?.............................................................................................................................
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The story and writing is really good. characters are interesting and early signs of world building shows promise. The only major problem is once you start paid chapters there are a lot of problems with inconsistency. titles, names, and gender pronouns switch and change frequently. This is a quality issue. I don't know what happened but this isn't acceptable.
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On chapter 30 so far and it’s disheartening to see these seemingly big hidden beings already tracking him so early on, so much pressure so early onAnd I know character growth is the goal but some of his decisions are just plain dumb? Like not taking advantage of the greatest abilities - him having a system that makes levelling faster as has been mentioned he could just farm beasts or badnits and become stronger but no.??Idk I’ll read on and hopefully there’ a change but the power system is unique which I appreciate and can tell there’s a larger world out there but still got mystery to it making you want to know more