the story is nice but it seems to jump in places, causing the story to seem choppy.and what are even the dollsand if you explain the purpose of events it might help it flow easier
The world building and the characers are really good. Also, the writing is spectacular, too. The way of narrating is very engulfing, so much so that I find myself completely focused on the story very often. Try it, it's really good.
It's actually relatively good, as trial reads go. Be warned however: large portions of this novel will be nonsensical or unsuited to other parts of the novel. Examples include the nonsense that is his only attack skill, the fact that literally nothing he does costs any resource, his obsession with equipment over skills, the general lack of sense with stats, and the entire setup surrounding those stupid "death soldiers". This is not the author's fault, but rather the fault of the transcriber, who has changed major portions of this story and added random stuff in to pad out the differences in order to avoid copyright infringement while copy pasting almost literally everything else without regard to whether it makes sense to leave it that way. In the original story the MC actually does have an SSS talent which removes resource costs, is a mage who can fuse skills together, and doesn't even posess a system at all much less a horde of soldiers to murder his enemies for him. A lot of scenes will make much more sense if you keep in mind that the original author didn't have him as an invincible tank with an army.
Another story with an interesting premise but bad writing. The author doesn’t understand the concept of flow, so the writing is very choppy as a result. And the writing itself seems like it was probably written by a young teen. I would recommend passing on this one.
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good ??????...I want her ...very goodgood novel..................,.....................nice
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If you like vampires, overpowered mc then what are you waiting for go read the novel. Right now this novel only has few chapters but i can guarantee that you'll get hooked only after few chapters if you're a fan of this genre. Really waiting for new chapters. Till now great work author.
a piece of adviceCool LOOT/skill/Item/pets/some se* scene is all most reader want from apocalypse game world , well most chinese author know this so that's why they always get hight number of reader no matter how bad they'r story is people will still read it ALL FOR THE LOOTALL HAIL LOOT
As expected of Hide! His books are always interesting to read. And this one was no different. I had a lot of fun reading it though it took me a while understand Dilan. I can not spoil anything more here.
I hate to say it but the main character is a simp. Instead of making her fall in love with him, why does he act like the inferior and goes to mess with that other man. I think she doesn’t like him because he is too nice to her that caused her to Friendzone him. Like the saying goes in order to capture one must let loose. He should never show that he likes her or she will feel less interested. Simping=Death
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