I'm sure if I just missed it but there's no going into the game or anything.. I found the writing close together and tbh I got confused really fast. Some words like evident are overused, like in the very first paragraph of the first chapter. The characters are very unique and development is ok. I recommend hiring an editor because I see a lot of well.. grammar errors, etc. Keep writing though, your creative expression is a very healthy habit!
Very good quality of every aspect and very enjoyable with a good development and belivable but funny characters.If i were to add anything it would more grinding for levels
The spawn of a jealous pettty man with **** for brains.............................................................................JK it is just boring overused crap
I enjoyed the novel... .
I love this book. the translation is very good. I hope this book will get picked because I cant find any decent translations online. ???????????
Dropping at chapter 70Poor grammarBadly written characters (male lead is an annoying ungrateful 4ss while female is just a mindless maiden in love)Story is ok but can make you roll your eyesAll in all, decent for an '******* writter', good luck!
This is really a hidden gem. I couldn't understand why this book didn't get chosen. It's writing is superb, the main character is extremely smart, careful (I mean... his identity as a player only get exposed in chapter 990+) and his personality is so unique and likeable. The plot in each missions are always interesting and unpredictable, with MC solving those problems by his unique and out-of-the-box method. I have been following this novel with MTL (ha, that shitty translation for God's sake) ... This novel is just that good.
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Too drawn out, things worth 3 paragraphs at most end up taking close to 5 chapters insteadAnnoying ass characters even for a cultivation novelNot worth readingLack of development in all places
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