It's good, loving the lore so far, although we went from truck kun to big bang kun so thats new, either way MC is still a baby but his wishes make this story interesting I can already tell this will be one of those harem stories were mc aura farms for a living.
Okay, so far, this one is pretty decent, but I really can't with the dialogue.Most are just too unnatural. Unbearable almost. At times it's good, but in others? Not so much. (Maybe it's just me, I don't know.)A lot of the nicknames are downright cringe, same for how some situations play out. In general, it just feels like a kid dreamed this up, thinking that it was how Mafia bosses acted.But, aside from all of that, the story itself is fun and the writing is better than the average novel on WN. It has mistakes here and there, but those are easily ignored.I can see some obvious effort behind this, which makes me root for the author. Good luckTLDR: It's a fun novel that you shouldn't look too deep into. 3.8/5
Story could have been better. MC is arrogant in a negative sense. I don't understand where all those Intelligence stats are going, because he acts just as ignorant as in the begining, even with his increase in intelligence.I guess the author has used intelligence stat only to help with creation of additional skills
Good story!With pacing as smooth as butter and characters got their distinct voices.I has immense potential to be a hit.Looking forward to more chapters.
I've been hooked since the first chapter and binge-reading this 'til the latest chapters and I want more! Darius is a tsundere that is only soft on Xion and no one else, and the sexual tension... I love this! Please update more chapters, Author!
Interesting, addictive, intriguing and well written book with enchanting characters. Well done to the author. Keep going!!!
Absolutely wonderful story that I have no complaints about besides the fact that I can not continue to binge reading this story for 1000 chapters straight! Keep up the great work Author!
What time is it ? Are you sleeping away, Author ?Update !
good writing, plot is kinda cliche but is fine I guess, sadly there ain't much chaptersaside from that, keep up the good work and hopefully you could update the story
Author please can you write a auxiliary chapter on the magic system of this novel including mystic gem, elixier field and soul ranks, slots for magic gems and all, please that would solve many problems of the readers as they can understand it better beforehand. And please also explain which magic talent absorb how much mana from the consumed resources with little details in single auxiliary chapter. I liked the novel very much. but please release the chapter if you find my suggestion good enough. And give reply to this review so i can understand your reason of not releasing such chapter before. And thank you for giving such masterpiece.
Pretty good start but could work some side story l chapters that talk about the past
2 / 5The story and the characters have potential. It's not a bad story up to chapter 13.The reason I couldn't go on is because this is written by a terrible writer.Every single sentence has at least 1 or 2 spelling mistakes. The grammar is worse than that of a 10 year old.I can't enjoy reading this regardless of how good the story may actually be because the grammar is just that bad.