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The character and plot setting of this book are perfect. I'm intrigued. You are doing a great work and I can't wait for more uploads of this book.
I'm just writing this review because of the annoying update stability.....
okay, no big deal that there isn't a fixed amount of chapters per day, really, but at least try to keep the updates at the same time per day. one day you get them on point, then one the next morning (why?), then one day with no update (why??), then one day with two chapters (nice) and the next with none (why????). if the author can't keep up with updating/translating say something... or just say: " one chapter per day" no big deal
Anyways:
Some grammatical errors. But way better than average.
Really good and interesting story. Some annoying side stories and/or filler chapters that don't have any value.
Is a harem novel. So no characters that are too deep, but at least way above other novels.
Nice world background. System/Apocalypse, nothing new, but nicely implemented.
Story is well paced, and characters doesn't feel shallow moreover there interaction feels natural.Mc is cool headed, he stays low key but not at extreme level. He also shows off sometime (which doesn't effect much). He will also travel to other places like secret realm(specially mentioned because some low key mc just stays at room)Also I will say translation quality can be improved, there were error in one or two sentences so far, rest is good.And world background is slowly raveled, it doesn't feel like information dump nor does it feel like it's lacking in information, overall it's good.So I can confidently say go ahead and read it.Current Reading status:- 20 chaps
Comensare aver tu novela se ve muy buena gracias por subir los capítulos espero poder leer rápido todo feliz navidad autor ahhh aún no comiénso la otra pero hay voy mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
wonderful storyI like Blake and the theme of the storyI also love the actionwould love to see where it goesbravo to the author..........
Where to begin , this was my first timing reading this genre but this was an absolute page turner for me. I can see that the author has worked really hard to create a wonderful story. The background and the characters are flawlessly introduced in the story , looking forward to more chapters
I want to delete this novel from my library but it still there though Ibhave done many ways to remove it. can anyone advise me how to?.Nothing agains it, just not my cup of tea
Our MC transmigrated and becomes a toy maker/tv show producer. As usual our Mc has knowledge that the world doesn't have, but works hard to do so. The plot is decent paced, and is realistic. If you want fast developed pacing this is not it, but if you want world building than this is for you.
The story is just starting, so it’s hard to predict how the plot will go and how detailed it could be. But I’d say that the punctuation and grammar does make me confused sometimes. If you need any help, I’ll try to point out some things. Although, don’t get discouraged ! We all start from somewhere, and I think you have a very good world build, which was my weakest point when I first starting writing. So keep up the good work author !
This is a review based up to chapter 60 of the novel.The chapters were short, but I enjoyed it, enough to spend all my fast passes! I thought the setting was unique, while still maintaining some cliches. The misunderstandings were enjoyable imo and I like seeing their actions when they switch bodies. It's pretty interesting, more than you would think, honestly. I say this as someone who does not usually enjoy the classic cultivation type novels too much, of course there are exceptions, and in my opinion, this one has the potential to be one of those exceptions. I could see it becoming repetitive in the future, but for now I think it has good potential.It's the first I've read out of the new batch, but I rate it highly. I will be reading the next couple that interest me soon. Hopefully they are just as good or even better!