This novel so far is quite good. i am not giving so much ratings now because of the updating of chapters but so far i love the novel. It sounds more like Kdrama high school movie but a little intense. i like the characters. Mia and her friendWilder and ice with his girlfriend Orange but not wanting to be a spoiler but i cant wait to see how the two lover birds would end their relationship so Mia could step in.
Not a big reviewer but liked the book and have kept reading it.
Going in, let's hope it is any good.......
So... You deleted fair reviews to get a better rating? Here you go, enjoy 1 star. Delete this one and there will be more. 140 characters are annoying.
The story is good but the writer is too biased.
understandably, this fiction has a fairly interesting start with a non human protagonist. the down side is that the author, yes im sure they don't speak English as a primary language and have adjusted to that, but there is no noticeable improvement or effort to improve the multitude of glaring vocabulary mistakes the characters have no real "meat" to them, no substance or relatability. they are very one deminsional with little growth - to me at least.the story is a cookie cutter bit with a slight twist with the system. You can ignore similarities or the boring monotony thanks to that twist.Author does update steadily.the world itself doesn't appear horribly built - have not Ben able to read much past 50. it started hurting my brain.as a whole, the fiction is one you'd likely read once and waste time with. at least the free chapters. having read at least half of the available chapters - at this time - I can say it isn't worth reading past the premium status. no actual improvement is done in the authors writing and it isn't worth spending cash on.
Very interesting, adds a lot of new ideas to the world of cultivation. I would think things would progress differently and the cultivators would be far more aggressive but overall I think the story is decent.
In this story, the author will share his thoughts about his other novels, where to send, where to turn the story, thoughts about writing stories. What to do when the lines passed? 500 - 10000-50000-100000 words? This is a good marketing ploy so that a beginner author would like to write further, there was some sort of incentive. And then enter this track and write further, this is a fascinating activity.At the same time, apparently, it is necessary to improve the grammar ... there is much to strive for and to grow.It is interesting for 1 month, 3 months, 6 months, 12 months, how many people will see the work? How many will subscribe or unsubscribe?Maybe finally there will be a new story from another author dedicated to the Silk Road?This is all very entertaining!Many thanks to the authors of this site!You can be not only a reader, but also an author, this process is no less fascinating
The story was quite interesting.... Character development made me think something out of the box.. Good work and keep up the talent .. Also the way in which the story is laid is something which I think has been a part of your life.... But anyways quite a good novel...
thaks for the great book ..................................................................... ........................................................................................................
One of the annoying things about this novel is the constant flashbacks to explain something. It just breaks the flow of the story doing it this way. The next annoying thing is that the MC is basically getting nerfed in the first few chapters because of his d0uche of a brother for no discernible reason. The little sister is no better since she’s basically a leech who only makes trouble for the MC and not even respecting him even though he’s looking after her. It’s amazing that the MC despite having tens of thousands of mana didn’t even have a ****** attack based mana. I know that his Masters reason was for him to get the basics but wouldn’t teaching him how to defend himself while out in the wilderness be common sense?I don’t mind the MC suffering a bit and get stronger because of it but mishap after mishap just makes me think it’d be better for him to just die to put him out of his misery. The stability of the updates is good but there are some unusual word choices and minor spelling mistakes that I can ignore.
Don’t read this garbage.Everything tou hate about thise cultivation novels where the MC avoids killing people and gives useful items away to random people for free? It’s also in this novel.Let’s not even mention that his ‘academy’ is fucking virtual and not even a real thing. Like what the actual ****? Signs of a garbage-tier author.