Hey again, Yeah the 6 parts of the chapter were rewritten a little bit. But enjoy the story! Although my writing quality is not as good as most authors i do hope that they are understandable in some way and also i pray for improvements in the future so please dont hesitate to correct some errors in any chapters it helps me improve too!
I love this story so much...It is quite outstanding however the fact that when i got to the best part,I have to pay made my currently broke self sad...like none of my fav stories are free however it is understandable considering how good this story is...
Why are the girls and women in this story so weird? Either they are perverts or sexual assaulters... Not one woman was mentioned without sexual thoughts including the MC's mother! The author doesn't know how to write women. The pacing of the story is very summary like. It's the type of things I would expect from an article review of the story rather than the actual story...The world building is almost nonexistent... All I know about the place is that it's the modern world with hidden martial artists. I had good expectations at the beginning but it just went downhill after the students started sexually assaulting the mc in public because of his sweat. The parents of the MC are also there just for name's sake. They contribute almost nothing to the story except their existence. Sorry to say this Author but this is my honest opinion.
Hello, KJVZeanso here... Finally, after some time of Hiatus, I could return with newer Chapters for Volume 4: The White Shadow, for the main Arc for this Volume, will begin. Thank you to those who wait this long.
Too much cringe, too much formal words. Not my cup of tea ☕.
I am interested by the story so far, the development pace is not bad. The MC is quite intellectual and can plan ahead. I'm really curious to see where this will go and hope that it will continue to focus on the evolution of the ''family'' as whole. It would be quite refreshing to NOT have the MC simply outgrow everyone and have a ''solo'' story about him. keep up the good work!
Read her first book as one of my friends is an avid fan and recommended it to me! but after reading just few chapters! I became addicted! and now we bond over what is new with the author's works, be it updates or new books! We will always support you author, I have become your loyal fan!
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Absolute trash.Waste of time.Why do people create this type of novel, when they know they were getting nowhere with this.First 15 chapters are way too cringe.
the only reason I cant rate it a 5 star is because of the update frequency and I hope taht changes . it's a great novel and the story so far is great.
I have a question, what control does he have to prevent the betrayal of his summoned people?...............................
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over all this is a good story to read a bit bad here and there with the grammer not the spelling the way the words are put together in order to form a sentance espically in those older chapters other than that its a good read