Bloody Hell

i find Amelia less and less dignified.

story would be so much better if the MC was not fawning over Zhao Ying. I mean. He should be old enough to not be such an idiot. Or at least to not be attracted to short sighted, vapid girls. I mean. She keeps looking down on him, thinks skills or martial arts are better than intelligience/knowledge. Even when he beats other people in combat she looks down on him. She is always following around his enemy, who is arrogant and like to bully and look down on others... I mean. Either she is not as good and kind as she appears to be, or she is to ****** minded to have any real character of her own with which to express opinions that do not line up with Zhuo Fei Yangs. Honestly, at no point in the story does her character come off as attractive or appealing. I cannot see an intelligient individual actively pursuing or even liking someone like that.

Too much cringe, too much formal words. Not my cup of tea ☕.

First: I have to say that I'm glad author-san used reincarnation instead of body theft of those so called righteous transmigrators. As a cultivator myself who reincarnated in this mortal world, I'm happy that author-san know how blasphemous the act of body theft is.Second: This novel remember me of History Strongest Senior Brother, where the mc is the so called Young Master, the mid or final boss from the lower realms. It's good to see this approach because this make the mc strong from the start and we don't have to swallow the inumerable luck encounters that mc with poor background need to reach the same height that a Young Master.Third: I hope there are many "protagonists" to appear in the novel against our mc even in the Immortal Realm (if there one or similar in the future). Because what we want to see a Young Master doing is slaping arrogant protagonists! (how in the world the mortals of this world can like arrogants protagonists without a background and only because they are transmigrators/reinccarnators/got a great luck encounter is out of my compreension and maybe a hidden dao of the heavens).4th: Her senior sister is a yandere? I hope not.5th: Author-sam, o you tought about using a "female protagonist" as a enemy to the mc? Or if mc can befriend some more moderate "protagonist"? (Arrogant "protagonist" don't need mercy)6th: Amazing novel, I'll try to vote the power stones in this novel every day o/

Not bad...............

So goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know more! I want more chapters!!!!! His writing style is the best! And Finally he make a game novels!! My jam! My cup of tea!! Please continue Author!