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I love everything about this novel. if only it would update more frequently it'd be perfect.
This review is current up to chapter 200. I will also do my best to not spoil anything but only provide hints.I want to start with the negative. Thus far, the only problem I have with this story is the MC is a bit too lax. The MC joins a new school who do some…questionable things for recruitment. After something quite traumatic, he is essentially perfectly okay with being someone’s experiment. I don’t have a problem with how it played out as it played out well, but I wish the MC was more hesitant, questioning, and that more inner monologue was shown after he was recruited to the school to show more depth to how he was feeling and justify a bit more why he agreed to do some of the things he did.Now for the positive, I love how the world is being built. We are 200 chapters in and the setting for the world has been established but there is still a huge amount of mystery surrounding everything. The school the MC is attending also actually has some depth to it and doesnt feel just randomly thrown together.As for the MC himself, he isnt necessarily a pushover but he won’t seek out trouble either. As stated before, he is a bit too “go with the flow” but he does have a bit of decisive ruthlessness in him. The side characters have some personality to them but they haven’t been explored in extreme depth as of yet.Finally, for those wondering about romance, there’s nothing yet. There are a couple of potential partners but nothing concrete. One of my own pet peeves is I despise when romance is forced into a story through some unfathomable coincidense and it just magically works out. So far, there’s signs there are going to be romance but it doesn’t appear as if it’s just going to be thrown into the story randomly, which is a huge plus point in my book.Overall, I highly recommend it. It’s been a fun story so far.
Really nice book. Looking forward to more chapters.
This is fire ?, but I wish it had more chapters Question: will the mc find his wifeQuestion 2: is his son the grandmasterQuestion 3: how strong is a golden core cultivator
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
It seems like webnovel completely abandon the novel's raw name and author's name in the app........................................................................
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This story is very intriguing, i love stories with systems, and this one is off to a great start, I like the concept and the mc, I can see the effort placed into the story, it is well written and deserves its five stars. Keep up the good work
Very cool! A little like a hybrid of Bloodborne and SCP, so if you're into that, I'm sure you'll love this. 10/10 I've already done fanart and will probably do more
Had an enjoyable time reading this novel but the remaining 20+ chapters are stuck behind paywall so you will never find out the ending unless you pay for it. I can consider paying money to unlock chapters but not for limited time access like privileged. Dropping it this now.
It felt slightly fresh in the beginning but got boring very fast after MC got into acadmy.I wouldn't recommend it to someone who wants to see slightly faster progress in story.
A riveting work of art from this author, the plot, character development, storyline and setting is just superb. The work of a genius
