cool good nice
Looks nice based on the first initial chapters, really looking forward to continuing it
congaratulationsto the author. hope your success
This is the first time I've seen such a narrative, and there are few chapters, so I don't want to make harsh comments. The novel is good, I hope it continues. The template progression will hopefully be balanced. Because it's not a fusion template of 2 players, it's a template of 2 separate players.
Honestly, I never expected the story to be this good. Sure, there were a few parts here and there that didn’t quite hit the mark for me—but hey, everyone’s got their own opinions, right? You might love those bits, or you might join me in feeling a bit disappointed. But let’s be real, it’s not the story I didn’t like—I love it. Even the tiniest details? Somehow, they’re all amazing.I literally had to search far and wide to find anything I could complain about. And after all that effort, I’m still left with just a couple of nitpicks. So yeah, if you're looking for flaws, good luck, because the story’s pretty solid.
Here is my assessmentThe plot was intriguing, but I'm not really into these kinds of books, so all I can really say about it is that it was good. However, the paragraphs were too long; try shortening them so that readers like me can read it easily. I've only read the first five chapters, can't read further, but I'll definitely add it to my library.
Hah, the homework is finally finish. Now, just wait for the bell.
And suddenly the blue color of the potion of kindnesd turned into a dark purple.
Okay, my family is not a reguler family. my family comes from nobility, the proof is, only a nobles who have fungus in the butt, fungus symbolizes that our degree is higher than ordinary people.
"What? Of course not, but do you want me to just pretend to be like you?"
"To perform a blood binding with a Demon and not only live but also have no lasting damage, requires nothing less than power, either light or dark." She continued.
"From the moon ashes we born, from the dimension, we came from, as the early creation of yours!"