I am the immortal

love to read it again and again ,so addictive

I wanted to like it, I really did. I love vampires with systems, but alas I didn't feel it. By it I mean that compulsory factor that makes you want to keep reading even when you shouldnt. As for world background and the others if I start speaking I am afraid I will be reported for it sounding like a personal attack. As I said I wanted to like it but it was just lacking in substance, the plot needs to thicken and certain events were very transparent and honestly being able to predict the next chapter and the next chapter more than once makes the story lose it's mystery factor that hooks a reader

I cant believe i havent found this until now, its really good, now heres 5 stars                                                           

The story so far has been a fun read, I have finished chapter 9 and will continue to read after more chapters are up so i won't be left hanging. The character is developed well, from what I can tell the mc seems to be leaning towards the darkside but I'm not saying that's bad! We're lacking cold mcs nowadays and this is a good breather, keep it up!

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Very Good continue.