AkutoSai01
I love the novel so far and bear cub is so cute!!!! ?
One of the stronger novels from this terrible batch. This novel features:-Decent Translation Quality (feels like a chapter was skipped before the tournament though).-Soulless world and characters. Not quite cardboard though.-Sexism (chinese obligation at this point).-Boring and uninteresting story.Compared to the other novels from this batch this isn't the worst thing ever but it's still pretty bad. I wouldn't recommend reading this but if you really have nothing else then you could maybe consider it. I wouldn't though, even with my ridiculously low standards.T
This novel has a good concept but is extremely boring. Instead of progressing with a story the author spends time going through a different side characters POV almost every chapter. It becomes annoying very quickly. The skills and levels are also translated wrong. One chapter he will unlock a skill, then 40 chapters later he unlocks the same skill again even though he has it. The same can be said about levels. If the author focuses on the story rather then the POV of the harem it would be 4-5 star quality. But due to the above reasons and translations it’s barely 2.5 star quality.
The novel deserves nothing absolutely nothing I would give it a 1 star but some of the writing was good but I don’t understand is the MC Tomas or Charles? Also is MC a Female or male also this novel is a Walmart version of the name ju jutsu kaisin
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I have read over 130 chapters, the story has so much potential. The only thing i hate is that the POV keeps changing almost every other chapter. Some of the POV are not that important that the author put that the chapter can be skill in the title.
Amazing one of the best novels I ever read I hope he keeps going with this wonderful novel I mean NOT HAREM YET??!!!!!!!!!!! but love the story
Starts off very promising with a likeable MC and the mystery behind his birth. But then it's all about his encounters with beautiful ladies. And nothing about being a medical doctor.... so, yeah.
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Just saw this beautiful piece. .. for one's who have not tried it yet do give it a try.. .There are few mistakes but they don't really count.Its not like we the online authors go for multiple editing.We need to be real badass for writing something here straight from our minds. So cherish the writings. Keep it up author!!!
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