Don't know if it's story telling bad or writing the story is bad, for this novel
Man y hope this author is not gonna pull a Tales of Demons and God's on us and start updating once a month!
This story become more interesting towards the end. A good read. Story felt abit frustrating at the beginning but as u kept on reading it will become better.
If you like Demon’s Diary, you will certainly like this as well. Conversely, if you like this novel and wish to read something similar, read Demon’s Diary.
No updates?
I did enjoy the earlier chapters of this novel, but after a while I found the protagonist's naivety become more and more glaring, and started to find it harder to identify with him or root for him as the novel progresses. His lack of backbone, subservient nature, and simplistic outlook is frustrating to read. He acts almost wilfully foolish at times in order to progress the plot, eg, forgetting about CCTV, self incrimination, etc.
Additionally, he has multiple special powers that he just seems to forget about all the time, only using them in very specific situations, and not the multitude of other situations where they could have been useful. Whilst these flaws will likely change (I'd certainly hope he improves and develops as time goes on) it's ultimately taking too long to see any sign of his improvement for me to remain invested - I haven't gone beyond the free chapters due to this so bear that in mind.
The novel features uber Germanic nationalistic themes, which most of the time can be explained away as world building, but it's very heavy handed. Constantly hearing how fantastic the German Empire and the German people are (in actuality Europeans of every nationality who fled Earth to colonize space hundreds of years ago), how superior and handsome Aryans are/how inferior everyone else is, etc. It's odd to say the least, especially when the narrator voice and even other alien races seem to share and repeat this view at every opportunity. It feels like I'm reading some propaganda distributed during the 1930s/1940s at times.
The protagonist's motivations and goals revolve around progressing up the chain of command of this xenophobic meritocracy, despite being treated abhorrently by them and it's people for the color of his hair and eyes. Unfortunately he has well and truly drank the fanatical Koolaid and is willing to go to extreme lengths to remain a part of it and defend them. Further making it hard to empathize with him.
There are a couple of cases where the plot feels contrived, for example, a side character discovers an old social media photo that literally trillions of other people (including the military, friends/family, etc) inexplicably missed. The thing is, this could be properly and naturally integrated with a bit of extra effort but that doesn't take place.
Apart from that, chapters are a very good length, and grammar/spelling is practically flawless, only a couple of minor typos here and there which aren't distracting.
I got as far as chapter 11 I know it might be too few chapters before judging, but I doubt it.Three main issue1)Too simple2) Too convenient3)Too fast-paced.within 10 chapters, he reaches the 4th realm of cultivation for this world, finds a disciple, and kills all bandits who are at the 2nd realm of this worlds cultivation, helps a city lord from an invasion in which a demonic cultivator of the 3rd realm of cultivation helps said people invading and then while fishing stumble upon the strongest sect master in the country of which the mc than joins said sect all within 10 chapters, chapters are average in length.Chapter 11 is what killed it for me, I know the system was going to make it easy for the mc but this way too easy all he does is check in every day and it gives him random stuff.Good points-writing is alright some words and grammar here and there needs work but it's very readable.-characters are the strong point of this story the mc is actually fun to read, his little disciple is as well, and their interactions are fun. Even the talking system is cool I know most find them annoying and with good reason, but his system seems to be a cool bro and not a jerk.
Look up almighty student way better translations available
Horrendously bad grammar. The writers English definitely is not fluent, but it seems like they don't do basic editing. The concepts of the story are pretty decent though.
this book is simply amazing, I usually wouldn't read these sort of books but this one has me hooked right from the first chapter! l would love to see more of it ❤️
On this whole platform this thing second only to Shadow Slave. It's a shame if people miss out on this. Get it to the top my friends! Great characters, worldbuilding, comedy, whatever you want. It has it!
If you love trash novels, this is like dumpster diving outside of the 4 Seasons Hotel during an international business conference. In other words, this trash is higher quality than most quality works. Just pay attention to the underlying overtone, instead of the characters strength, and you'll quickly discover that for yourself