女神还是小可怜，被我投资了！Not a bad novel, will probably read it more online. Hope it gets picked!
Seeing as this is the same author as hvisland, I am expecting big things. i don't much care for Grammer mistakes so long as you can tell what it was trying to say. overall I will be sure to read till the end
I love an unwittingly overpowered mc, who isnt needlessly cruel just for the sake of doing so, great story
Well not much to say as the story was past face and pretty exciting, so I really liked it even though purely romance novels is not my cup of tea
Loving the story so far and can't wait for more updates? I love how the royal siblings conduct themselves and interact with each other. Being supportive of each other and their love interests.
I thought this would be interesting, but this is another mindless face slapping novel. They sacrifice the story for these moments and the whole novel hurts becomes of it. many other novels do this and it really bothers me. dont do it if it will make your novel worse. Also chapters 1-10 the translation is pretty good, 11-20 it gets a bit wonky, then from 21-30 you can see the problems. I stopped st 31 because the story became mindless, the whole system was forgotten for some dumb drama, and the translation become worse throughout the story. hope this becomes better in the future.
great story one of the top 10 in my book. keep going with this story! i will keep reading it!...................................................
The Good thing about this novel is how well done the translation is. Beides a few minor troubles with the right vocabulary, but that might be because the original uses very hard to translate concepts, there is noting to complain.This is sadly not the case for the rest. Besides the stupid and illogical way the whole power/special ability system is presented, the whole story feels fractured. The flow is broken every few chapters to introduce new characters or motivations to destroy any kind of character impressions you had of the MC.It is literally a transformation from normal 9 to 5 worker, cowardly and meek, to a cutthroat assasin/businessman who enjoys killing, to a zealous cultivator, to a completely brain dead and high on power fool, to a lovestruck ape, to a responsible family guy, adopting useless baggage and carrying her trough supposedly life and death trials, and of course the always important nationalist. After reading more than 40 chapters I have seen many cliches, very few new ideas and there is still not a single positive or negative thing I can say about the MC.Worldbuilding/Background is one of the worst I have ever seen. There are literally thousands of other planets and possible alien races, but despite participating in a solar system wide event there is not a single description of an alien race. In general the reader has to imagine 90% because the author does not describe the places or people. The power system is even more flawed, just an example: Every being across multiple galaxies has the same brain structure and path of advancement, which means they are all human and have grown in the same environment, which explains a lot about this book, Not! According to the author there are different races, and planets which have developed 100s of times longer and use technology thousands of years in the future. Evolution or just the advancements brought by interstellar technology are just not a thing in this novel. Feels like if the British who used their technology to conquer dozens of nations and looked down on the aborigines are suddenly totally overrun and outgunned by a single village idiot who happens to gain the friendship and support of a deserter. At the same time there are many superfluous scenes, which increase word count and boredom in equal measures.To conclude, this novel is incomplete and needs to be reworked extensively before it can be called literature.The concept has potential, but the execution is rushed and majorly flawed.My Summary:An average guy gets lucky and optains the potential and resources to become powerful. Watch how he stumbles his way from an backwards nation into the middle of an intergalactic conflict. Follow him on his path of adventure, learning and personal growth.
Ngl, this is what i wanted! I love the story and especially the mc, Etc. I would love to see more of the nocel and yeah. I support ya!!! Looking forward to see more.
Isnt this just a bad copy of Everyone Else is a ReturneeChinese as always being Chinese.......................................................................
No one wants to read about ****ty urban doctors lusting over pretty girls anymore, Qidian. It's so cliche and boring... why can't you pick legitimately good novels?
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