Personally, it has a good plot and strangely it has a similar problem to my novel which is grammatical errors, nevertheless, it's good looking forward for more chapters
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
This novel is good if you were to read the raws but the translated version is worthless the names the content and everything is changed, this is unacceptable if I wanted an original novel I would have read one why would they change a translated novel? It is not like they are making it betterSo 0/5 for translation and 0/5 for story
Ahh poor MC! I felt bad for him... He was just trying to protect his... um... ahem!And this writing style is so nice the novel is also fun to read. good work author!
A very interesting start, the storytelling style is unique and quite epic. Probably at the beginning, there is not enough specifics, but then the author gradually reveals his ideas. Good luck!
GOOD You are back!!!I really liked your previous work Solo player Arvin... So I anticipate big things from this book too...Don't disappoint me...
I read the first 20 chapters and i couldnt take anymore. The story doesn't progress in any natural way. The author wants something to happen, thus it does. It gets pretty unbearable pretty fast, and you can tell from the comments people leave.Wouldnt recommend wasting your time.
first : i want to tell that i don't OWN THE AUTHOR RIGHTSecond : IT'S NOT MINETHIRD: NOT MINE???FOURTH: JUST WANT TO SHARE ONE OF BEST FANFIC EVER
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Nah no way Alan the mc is powerful to some exten but is a pushover and no villain worthy demeanor the title should be change as it’s misleading the novel even resemble of any type of villain he’s just your typical average cliche protagonist in those wuxia cultivation world novels that relies on plot armor. This novel says romance also? Wow Elijah the suppose protagonist of the novel he reincarnated to got more romance development in 4 chapters than Alan’s romance development in the whole 150 chapters I read in fact there wasn’t even a single relation ship development with the female lead in those chapters what is a disappointment
Unbelievably slow pacing. The MC registers for a fight in chapter six. The fight in question is scheduled to take place later on the same day. By chapter twenty, the MC still hasn't participated in the fight, and only a couple hours have passed since the events of chapter six.
Extremely superb I love the plot that he was reading story for dead person awsome. And when he sniffed the poison I want new volume I am curiously waiting for its new volume