An intresting premise on the reset trope. Instead of reverting to the start of one's life, the MC only resets his job, while also gaining a new one. It is certainly fresh and gives one greater interest to read.Then there are the skills that are well thought out and flow well with the combat.Hoping to see more, as the book gains more chapters.
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As is the story isn't bad enough, the author decided to add HAREM AND ROMANCE into the mix..............I personally hate romance and harem so I can't be too cruel with the review.
Author here! I am pleased as to how this book is coming out, I think it will be an interesting tale of a young weeb and his rise to the top of the world! He starts with nothing at level one, will his weeb knowledge help him in the isekai?
I really loved the beginning of the story. I have currently added this book to my library, and I hope to be able to finish it! I honestly love it, but I felt like you could have used different pronouns instead of repeating Berry. I do get that's the character's name, and you're trying to state that, but I also felt it was kind of repetitive. I recommend changing those to different pronouns like he, she, him, or her. Whatever Berry identifies as. As far as the book, I can't wait to read more of it. Anyone who reads this comment, this book is well worth your time!
It started off really good, then it gets messed up when relationships get involved, I liked the 3 'sisters' (Tina, trish, sheila) didnt like maddie that's fine also.... the mc gets his head all foggy when these relationships get involved and it kind of gets off topic and the mc calm composure its basically gone (maybe he gets it back 467 he's basically bat**** right now though)
Its slapstick comedy and it's not bad, but I can only take so much literal face slapping. Our MC builds his own virtual device and logs on to skynet. And as a result things are reversed for him.
Please start translating it on official platform, it's an amazing novel, mc is cool. The plot seems nice, characters are well defined and properly addressed.
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fresh. new. this novel is one of the gems that will shine sooner or later. more chaps please. writing quality is good, the flow of the story is smooth and the concept is intriguing. more please