Let me drop an initial review. I accompanied the author in the first 17 chapters since the new year. The writing quality is superb, the visual imagery vivid. Like in the hanging bridge, I could feel the thrill and the fear. This book is worth your time. I hope author would release more chapters daily as I can't wait for more.
This is one of the best stories I have read until now, the MC development is O.P and mainly the writing quality and world background are very good, overall I recommend you to read this :D!!!
Great start to a great novel! Enjoyed the tames greatly.
I’m not good at writing reviews and I rarely do but this is a great read. Trust ?u200d↕️ also good update speed, as of now I don’t think there has been a day with no choaters yet.
What the author did with the Auxiliary chapter and prologue is nice. It separated the info drop part and focused on the main story immediately. Nice ?
good book love it especially the characters
Hi fellow author!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far.Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable.Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best,IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!
After reading the last few chapters I can tell that the stories going down a path of constant brawls driving the plot; which I can't say I dislike. This is the first book I've completed since the others all went premium, and I hope we get more chapters soon enough.
Mc is very much a pushover, always getting pushed around by people, he never takes the initiative , always going with the flow and it's so annoying.
Very interesting story, I thought the synopsis/blurb could've been crafted better. The story overall was very good, I haven't read a lot of sword wielder stories so when I read this it was really interesting and to the point. Although the pace was a little fast, I think for someone reading webnovel it will catch their attention quickly. The paragraphs are not spaced well enough in my opinion, some are too long and they strained my eyes. Perhaps you can look into that in future chapters. Speaking of which, the paywall was a little too quick. I wouldn't recommend paywalling it that much unless you plan to write less than a hundred chapters. The writing was good, but sometimes the narrative slipped, like switching from the third-person perspective to the writer's/narrator's. There were no grammar or punctuation mistakes so far, but the use of passive voice was overrated, it got annoying to keep reading them. Perhaps balance them, but otherwise. I can't comment on the worldbuilding yet, but so far, so good. Avoid the info-dumping though, it won't help with a smooth narrative. The characters, Keven and Greg maybe, they sound and feel 2d, not real human. But maybe that was the author's intention to develop them further. the updates seem to be frequent and the development of the story is good enough, so I would say this deserves a 4/5 stars. Kudos to the author and happy reading!
took quite a while to understand , the story
We've got here a story that involves our MC going from weak to strong. Like the author had said and is acknowledging in his comment, the grammar part is still a bit off, but it's nothing really noticeable. As on WN you need to update constantly, it's common for us, authors, to make a few mistakes, here and there. The premise of the story sounds interesting, and I do love that the author uses the prologue to present to us exactly what kind of world is the MC going to be into. Great job!