I feel like anything with System in the title should be a tad bit faster paced than this, but since I'm not sure about the entirety of the author's vision, I'm assuming it's necessary build up.That said, even though the story is a bit slow to reach the system part, I think the author does well to keep the readers engaged. The relatability of Jack Anderson's life is one thing that I feel can retain the attention.His bad luck and rotten living conditions with only the slight sweetness offered by Kelly as the love interest was enough to keep me reading. While the quality of the writing could use some work (quite a bit of it, actually), it's readable, but I urge the author to aim higher. There is a nice story to work with here, but I do fear that some readers might feel betrayed by the pace.Good work though
If I had more votes, I'd vote for you man keep it up ?,I feel you are indeed underrated man,y'all we need to get this author going,he needs more love and support guys
Read up to Chapter 18 and this shit has a lot of potential. I've read a fuck ton of "Extra" novels and tho this ain't the best (TNE and Reborn as an Extra exists) it is still a solid read. The updating stability is also good with at least 1 chapter per day. His "Bloodline of Sacrifice" is also interesting and I don't think I've ever seen anything like it before (maybe I have but forgot, who knows?). Anyways lance don't you dare lock this shit at chapter 20 or some shit {be more like pancakes and just don't lock it :D}
Nice novel. Waiting for more chapters.
Not bad for a new writer. make a female mc story.
Hi fellow author!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far. Especially the deck of cards thing thats definitely a nice touchOh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable.Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best,IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!
is this an original works or a translated works. any mtl?
I love it I'm not lying this book is good . The character the names and even writing style. You use poems. The most wonderful thing about this reading is that the author conveys that he is in full control of the story, taking it exactly where he had planned and not like many works that a compendium of recurring improvisation.
Wow This is a fun read ngl. Didn't know you could write a cultivation novel. I hope you make him stay true to his shamelessness, I mean Monk in wuxia are usually most shameless of all lol they be like: "Amitabha benefactor, that treasure is fated with this penniless monk, hope magnanimous benefactor can part with it" ???
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This story is CRAZY in the best way! Our main character gets isekai’d to a dark, magical world and has to fight like every two seconds. There are angels, magic, and a ton of action, plus just enough romance to keep things sweet!Every chapter is like:Magic battles? ✔️Evil villains? ✔️Falling for a mysterious angel? Double ✔️If you like wild adventures with angels and epic fights, grab this one. It’s like a rollercoaster, but with more magic and better hair!
wow another apocalypse , the zombie king zombie lord. can't wait to see how it unfolds ?