This story is extremely well written and I can tell a lot of effort has been put into building the world and MC. There are very few grammatical errors due to the author actually caring about the readability of his novel that you don’t typically see in other novels of this level. The author is actively taking suggestions from his readers which contributes to how well the story reads. One thing that I believe the author does well in this novel is keeping the flow of the story consistent and reliable. I think the main contributor to this is the fact that the author plans out events ahead of time, outlining key events and chapters before writing them to connect seemingly insignificant details that you might look over to events later on in the story that would have played out much differently.
Review as of chapter 630. Might include minor spoilers but I'll try to keep them to a minimum.Short Version: Stop scrolling through reviews and just go read the novel!Long Version: I'll start off by saying that this novel is simply amazing. Stories like this are what keeps me from just deleting the app due to the sheer number of unreadable nonsense it has. Now for an actual breakdown:Writing Quality - The quality is simply top-notch. No grammatical mistakes, clear and concise sentences that flow into each other beautifully, as well as smooth transitions between different points throughout the story. It's obvious that the author has improved in this regard by quite a bit, compared to his first novel (Lightning is the Only Way), which was already incredible by Webnovel standards.Story Development - The novel is slow-paced for the most part, and especially at the beginning, but I find that positive in this case, since we get a better look at the struggles Alex (later Shang) has to go through to adapt to a completely new reality where his life is constantly on the line. There are eventual time skips in the story, which are unavoidable simply due to the fact that you can't become a Sword God without hundreds (quite possibly thousands at this rate) years of training.Character Design - This is the biggest reason for this novel's success. Everyone, and I mean EVERYONE, is fleshed out in such detail that it wouldn't surprise me if the author one day revealed he has been studying the human mind for over 100 years. As for Shang himself, the many hardships he has gone through and the eventual revelation that he is, for reasons I obviously won't mention here, the enemy of the world (Opposer vibes ?), have made him resolved to do whatever it takes to reach his goal. He will sacrifice anything and anyone for power.Updating Stability - Not much to say here. 2 chapters a day plus the fact that the author is an absolute legend. Broke both his arms at some point and somehow still pushed out chapters until he was eventually forced to take a small break.World Background - We get a basic understanding of how the world works and how the mages have complete rule over it early in the story and get more and more pieces of information in regards to the powers they wield, as well as the nature of the world itself, as the story progresses. Admittedly, there have been a few instances where the author goes into too much detail about something that isn't really relevant, but that isn't nearly enough to make the story less enjoyable, at least for me.Overall, this is truly an incredible story and I highly recommend it.Truly impressive work so far, Heat. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Very nice list. Only thing is that it’s missing the greatest masterpiece ever written, the novel above all novels, the undisputed magnum opus of all literature, one of the 7 forbidden texts of Korea…….. INVISIBLE DRAGON
A comfortable read this is, as the story makes great use of language in order to invoke imagery and emotion to the reader. I personally enjoyed reading as it gave me the time and opportunity to see how the story develops overtime.
It is a story of a boy who tries to restart his life after his father dies in a car accident. The story is very nice and author has amazing writing skills. I would suggest everyone to read this novel.
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Author really did a good job on ruining Itachi's image. Basically, this is just a story about Yun Che with Sharingan abilities. tbh, this novel will be better if it's really about Yun Che with Sharingan instead of Itachi in ATG world and i will really read it with joy. a shame indeed
5 stars ? ????. The storyline is good, the characters have depth, the main character is definitely no hero type, not everything goes out for her but she's not the smartest, not the strongest, feels really natural.
I'm writing this in order to get author attention, cause I'm too lazy to write novels so I'll just leave some of my novel ideas here...so in the beginning there was only darkness that infinitly gatherd until a single point, after countless millinema the darkness suddenly bursts leaving a blank space. that's where light is, light is the after affect of there being nothing in the void, and after the light formed it clashed with the void creating things like particles, Mana, more light, new elements created when the two combine. the theses things also create particles, and Mana, creating chaos. they also started to compress creating will, and thru will created primordial deities, and those deities ( who only know to compress their elements as they are like really ingnorant ) restrained there elements and compressed them to make them denser and denser, into it explodes as creating stars and planets and the like giving birth to more elements, and so on. that's what been on my mind, but the thing to take note of here, is that there is only one law and that is {COMPRESSION}. so authors out there if you see this I hope there is some inspiration or insight, even though the grammer is horrible.
Love Sci-fi novels and to be sincere this is my best so far. When I read the synopsis,I knew that this was one book I couldn't miss for the world and believe me when I say I wasn't disappointed. The book is intriguing,fancinating, motivating and superb.
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This is nothing. This is a trash. Imma report this shit??????????????????????????????????????????????????