I'm in love with the story plot. Keep writing, good job author ? ?
Not a bad novel wouldn't mind reading more chapters of it
Keep it coming, if possible make more R18 chapters but beside that rest is amazing. you are doing great work that everyone else can't do. proud of you.
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The melancholic vibe of this story is its major highlight for me. I like how the past is initially shrouded in mystery and slowly revealed, then the misunderstandings?? man that's enough to drive me crazy
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We made this story for the WebNovel Rising Star challenge!It is an epic story about a VR championship match in 2081, which is a year away! In 2080, virtual reality is stunningly up-to-date! The players fight it out in the Chinese-language PVP MMORPG Eve, and the devious hacker, Zero_Nocturnal, threatens to overthrow the world's natural order! Oh no!Can Xi and Mitsuru and the clan's they are in, Nocturnal, which was no relation to Zero_Nocturnal, and Fictitious_Roses, who are another Chinese-language clan, make it to and even win the PAX Eternal 2081 'con's ¥65,000,000 prize!?Find out in this stunning novel with a focus on fast, character-based action and a low-Sci-Fi universe, that is original to Web Novel!The main character, Xi Huan, who plays the character Otter_44351147 in the virtual reality PVP MMORPG, must fight for survival against the nefarious entity known as Zero_Nocturnal, who has a kill count of over 150,000! Can he stop Zero_Nocturnal and win the PAX Eternal 2081 convention's ¥65,000,000 grand prize!?
I the premise feels fresh. The action at the start was promising and like the direction of subsequent chapters. The main character is definitely not 1 dimensional and I can't wait to see what his lost memories are that changed him so drastically.
This novel has very good grammar, it is pleasent to read and only suffers from slight repetition with certain words and sentences.The first 13 chapters are confusing and the action is somewhat hard to follow, but it sets up a background for future development, so please read all the free chapters before deciding to continue or not. Because the story is actually quite good so far and has lots of potential.Author i hope that you continue to include the other characters in a meaningful way, because i wory this will become a story where the mc is the only one capable of handling things. Such a story can quickly become boring and repetitive.Otherwise you are doing a good job, make sure there is character development as the story progresses.*I like how sirius actually cries a lot, since he is a kid that makes him realistic as well, some authors just make the mc emotionless beasts from the beginning.
Thank you so much for going ahead to post this wonderful piece??
Hello everyone, writing the review for another event.
You should give this a try, hidden gem and love the story. Although I haven't caught up to latest chapter, I'll continue when more piles up. Can't wait to see what he cooks.