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Okay it seems I will be the author's first.Let's see. The story goes off interestingly, maybe the author could make the flow go smoother int he beginning of the first chap, but out of that I didn't see any mistake.Grammar great, plot amazing, world build is still waited. Now we only need to wait what will happen.Good job dear... Author!:)
Ok, so this book should continue!! so far it's amazing, I'm a fan of zombies and apocalypse books, this is just great.......................
1. Grammar sucks. I hate to say that I would rather read MTL than this.2. World background is unclear. It was said that MC time traveled, to what year? No one knows. And it also said that he came to a planet 'similar to where he lives before'. So, is it Earth or not? No explanation. Is it time travel or transmigration? No explanation.3. Story development is absurd. It is like reintroducing mana type of novel. The idea is great but how can they classify the strength system of humans and beasts alike to a high degree and develop medicines to enhance abilities IN ONE SINGLE YEAR?? I MEAN, HOW THE HECK?? Are apocalypse and R&D a joke to you? And do you know why the world changes? Because of system! Why is it like that? How is it possible? The answer is: plot armor. You just shut up and read.4. MC. Last but not least is our dear, beloved, and shining MC. There is one reader I notice commenting on MC's retardation, the absurd situation, and many more. You should read it, his is more refreshing than mine. In my opinion, MC (who is now a tree) is distressed by the oncoming war between humans and beasts. In one place, he is a former human, and in another place his subordinates hates the humans for a perfectly normal reason. The humans killed and ate their kin and descendants.So, MC decided to stay in the sidelines and keep neutral. A satisfying scenario you said? Yes, except that MC is a hypocrite. He killed the beasts for exp but let 2 girls go after he ordered a poisonous snake to bit them and then ask his subordinates (beasts of course) whether what he'd done was right or wrong. That's cruel you said? Heh. Why is he interested with them? The girls are young and beautiful. I really want to call the police. To no surprise after that MC is discovered by human and then human attacked and then people died and then human's fiancee take revenge and then MC slaughter their whole family....Nope. The MC decided to keep the fiancee in the forest with him (that lecher). The fiancee apparently wanted to kill one of his subordinates, the MC knew and even told his subordinates of it, yet still decided to keep her. I'm speechless. MC's idiocy know no bounds. His subordinates who saw their master caught in a 'honey trap' wants to kill her but MC punish them in a heavy-handed way and single-mindedly protect her. What is his explanation you said? I AM THE KING! ....At this point I really pitied them and began to hope for them to riot, start a coup, backstab the MC, rip his body to pieces and distribute it among themselves.
Its a good story unfortunately the translation are poor that makes me stop reading it. The translator need a good editor or improve the translation.