Not bad but also not good.
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this novel was one of the winners of Spirity , so it had great potentials, but alas it got a rushed ending , everything was rushed ,from relationships ,romance, powere ,etc ...even the writing quality was rushed at the end ? , full of misspelling and wrong names.and at the end of the day all MC's powers were borrowed from others, as if he wasn't the MC of this story ...but at least it got a happy ending
The whole concept of the story is interesting. Hidden mysteries amd secrets that have the potential to explode into an amzing storyline in the future? Count me in. The 50 floor tower did remind of a part of the comic Player Reborn, though. I like the dialogs and character interactions—they're immersive, real and flow quite well. The world building is coming together nicely, and using names that look like they belong in a fantasy-like civilization helps a lot. I look forward to reading more about Maha and getting answers to the prologue.
Hope this gets picked! If anyone finds the raw please drop it below. I don’t think i’ve read a novel with the narrative editor cheat that i’ve been satisfied with, but this summary has me hopeful the author doesn’t nerf it too hard. The sword bit at the end is a little red flag, but it probably won’t be the main weapon.
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I already love the plot, I hope it gets picked and or voted for. ................................ ......
tried really hard to make it past the first chapter. really, I did. the grammar made my eyes bleed and bled, due to inability to stick to present or past tense, and the blonde man with the katana and many wives made me cringe so hard that my father felt it.along with mc's inability to draw even the simplest only conclusions and the never ending train if tropes running their own train on my eyes, I couldn't make it.OP, please download grammar.ly or MS word with spell check, please. your product would be infinitely better even without proof reading.
Very Interesting, this story makes readers can imagine quite well. Continue your work, I'll still be waiting for the continuation of this story.Characters inside this story are quite strong
if he ends up being a hero don't tag a villain
Hmm.. i like this novel it capture my reading interest by reading the few chapters I also like the character background and the design of the golems . I hope hope you keep writing this novel author because i like this novel.... ☺☺
I think the first guy was wrong this isn't like RSSG its more of a cross-over between RSSG and A New World. Has an MC that uses knowledge of the pass to get ahead of everyone else (check), uses that same knowledge to get legendary class, weapon, and armor when first logging in (check), Uses knowledge to setup up a guild building, hire craftsman, create guild, to not only farm karma but to get further ahead; stating later that the guild building will be useless later on (check).This isn't like A New World where it takes 100 chapters to get to the next day because the author over explains everything to even what type of dust is on the ground. But at the same time, this novel doesn't really say a whole lot either, at least so far...I try to read the first 50 chapters before leaving a review, more so if I want to see how things play out or if I can't make up my mind; for example what I did for "Bloodline system" I read till chapter 500 before I left a review". But, I've read up until chapter 60, and really reading this is equivalent to "I did this in game, then this, then this, and this happen, then I did this, and this, and this, and look I'm so lucky...btw my world is on the brink of destruction, with pullulated air, barren fields & crops, zombie's, massive radiation, etc...but hey we're fine now because I moved us to a better location, so we can play this game that the government is forcing down our throats"...and then I did this, and this, and this,.....haaa it makes no sense lolFor those reasons I rated this as a 2.8. It's not bad but, story wise it doesn't make sense why; if his world was full of such destruction the government would force everyone to play a game; when their REAL bodies would still be in a fallen world....